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Maggie
post Jun 19 09, 22:43
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Limerick Junction (Revision 5 )

We're going to Limerick Junction
where poetry lost all compunction.
Such poems are crude
with language that's lewd.
Obscenity is their main function.

Peggy Carpenter Harwood

Limerick Junction (Revision 4)

We're going to Limerick Junction
where poetry lost all compunction.
Such poems are crude
with language that's lewd.
Obscene humor is their function.


Limerick Junction (Revision 3)

We're going to Limerick Junction
where poetry lost all compunction.
Such poems are crude
with language that's lewd.
Scandalous humor is their function.


Limerick Junction (Revision2)

We're going to Limerick Junction
where poetry lost all compunction.
Such poems are crude
with language that's lewd.
Sexual humor is their function.



Limerick Junction (Revision1)

We're going to Limerick Junction
where poetry lost all compunction.
Such poems are crude
with language that's lewd.
Bawdy humor is their function.

Peggy Carpenter Harwood

Limerick Junction

We're going to Limerick Junction
where poetry lost all compunction.
Such poems are crude
with much language lewd.
Bawdy humor is their function.

Peggy Carpenter Harwood


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post Jun 22 09, 08:29
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Hi Peggy,

I think function, in the sense of "a definite purpose" works well here; changing it would require changing the other two rhyming words, and I think you sure want to keep Limerick Junction smile.gif I hope you will enjoy your time in Ireland. One of my courses at the university was the Irish Literary Revival, I read a lot of Lady Gregory and William Butler Yeats, and I much enjoyed the stories of CuChulain. I also once wrote a long paper on Ulysses by James Joyce, another favourite writer.

Mark


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