Focus, Limerick (Pun) Options

[Larry]

Focus

Three young men who bred cattle in France
Chose a name for their place, not by chance.
So as not to confuse,
A small pun they did use;
Which explained everything at a glance





L5 did read: For they felt it explained at a glance

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*footnote removed - If you need an explanation, look at Mark's post!

[Marc-Andre Germa...]

Larry,

I'm afraid that this didn't make it for me; I wonder how many readers will get it without the footnote..

Also, this is a limerick, not a haiku. On the positive side, the limerick is technically well-written.

Mark

Focus

Three young men who bred cattle in France
Chose a name for their place, not by chance.
So as not to confuse,
A small pun they did use;
For they felt it explained at a glance


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For those who still need an explanation; Focus = “Where the Sun’s rays meet” or “Where the sons raise meat”!