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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in  |
Man from Bolling (Revision)
There once was an old man from Bolling who loved to go down the street strolling. With his purse in hand and a fandango fan, he set all his neighbors' eyes rolling. Peggy Carpenter Harwood Man from Bolling There once was an old man from Bolling who loved to go down the street strolling. He had lipstick in hand and a fandango fan. All who saw him felt their eyes rolling. Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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May 30 09, 20:22
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Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Larry,
Thank you for reading, commenting and suggesting an alternate last line!! Ha!! Ha!! I really like your line, but do think I'll keep the one I've got. Great to run into you on the boards!!! Peggy ······· ······· |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Man From Bolling (Revision) May 26 09, 20:50 
Cleo_Serapis Too funny Peggy!
My only issue is your closi... May 28 09, 20:53 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo,
Thanks for the excellent idea!! ... May 28 09, 23:50 Cleo_Serapis Much better Peggy!
YAY for you!
~Cleo May 29 09, 05:29 Larry Hey Peggy,
I think I knew a guy like that once. ... May 29 09, 17:35 merle Very entertaining!
There's a man who str... May 31 09, 03:24 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi merle,
Thanks for reading!!! This... Jun 5 09, 10:12 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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