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 Babylonian  Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty  |
White clouds stripe the sky as a jet skis beneath them, schussin snow swept peaks. ace Original third line: heading o'er mountains |
  
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Apr 5 09, 23:16
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 10,061 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Hi ace, This is indeed a lovely Haiku. But I confess to not knowing what you mean by 'Schussin'. Or have I missed something? Syl*** ·······  ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
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ace Skyline View [revised 29 Mar 2009] Mar 18 09, 17:02 
Arnfinn G'day Ace,
Haiku, the poet writes about a mom... Mar 19 09, 01:22 ace Thank you, John. They are fun to write aren't... Mar 21 09, 14:46 Cleo_Serapis Hi Ace,
Isn't it fun to watch nature? I love ... Mar 21 09, 17:40 ace Cleo:
Thank you for the read and the comment. I ... Mar 27 09, 17:05 Arnfinn Hi Ace,
Nah, I don't think 'shussing... Mar 28 09, 04:53 Cleo_Serapis Hi Ace,
Not sure about 'shushing' - how a... Mar 28 09, 09:07 ace John and Cleo:
You know what? I think I'll t... Mar 29 09, 14:44 Cleo_Serapis Very nice Ace!
I think it is a haiku since y... Mar 29 09, 17:22 ace Syl:
Have to admit my ignorance...don't kn... Apr 14 09, 14:49 
Arnfinn G'day Ross,
Dunno, about in mixing different ... Apr 21 09, 00:47 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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