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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in  |
Heralds of Springtime (Revision 2)
Pear blossom petals dapple young sprouting grasses, heralds of springtime. Peggy Carpenter Harwood Classic Spring Heralds (Revision 1) Pear blossom petals dapple young sprouting grasses, classic spring heralds. Peggy Carpenter Harwood The Heralds of Spring (Original) Pear blossom petals dapple young sprouting grasses, the heralds of spring. Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Apr 5 09, 15:13
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 Babylonian Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty |
Peggy:
This one is certainly getting there...in fact it may have arrived. With respect to the "herald"-"heralds" issue: while grasses and petals are plural, they could have a single herald; but I like the idea of three or four men with long horns playing to welcome spring. ace |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Heralds of Springtime (Rev 2/New Title 14 Apr 2009) Mar 28 09, 19:20 
Arnfinn G'day Peg,
The Heralds of Spring
Pear blo... Mar 30 09, 03:22 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
It's interesting that you also thoug... Mar 30 09, 07:10 Arnfinn Yeah, Peg. Autumn is falling all over the place.
... Apr 2 09, 04:36 ohsteve Peggy, I understand why John might have wanted it ... Apr 2 09, 11:27 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Steve,
Thanks for reading and your comment. Y... Apr 3 09, 12:35 Cleo_Serapis Hi Peggy,
A lovely image!
I would suggest s... Apr 3 09, 17:51 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo,
Thank you for reading, commenting, and t... Apr 3 09, 19:00 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi folks,
Is the revision any better?
Peggy Apr 4 09, 07:42 Cleo_Serapis Hi Peggy,
This one is getting there! Not sur... Apr 4 09, 07:50 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo and Ace,
Thank you both so much for dropp... Apr 6 09, 19:00 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi again folks,
I've changed the title again ... Apr 14 09, 06:21 Cleo_Serapis Peggy,
Yeserie, I think this one is ready for t... Apr 14 09, 07:20 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo,
Thanks so much for sticking with me on t... Apr 21 09, 10:39 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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