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 Apr 3 09, 07:21
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 Babylonian  Posts: 64 Joined: 2-April 09 From: Beautiful Brooklyn NY Member No.: 773 Real Name: Michael Pollack Writer of: Poetry  |
again the circle's drawing near to full
frail shrunken withered being lying there within herself first felt the fetal pull as one we were till birthed in light and air and now my turn to feed the one who fed and now my turn to lift who first held me and now my turn to lead the one's who led as spiral time and life as needs-must be Michael in Brooklyn ·······  ·······anything which does not kill me makes me stronger
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Apr 4 09, 16:11
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hi Mike
This is a very moving read for me, bringing back memories of my own mother, who had Alzheimer's. It does indeed take some adjusting to being 'parent to the parent'. It's part of my life that I still struggle to come to terms with even though my mother passed away 3 years ago. You have expressed your emotions very well and I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing Snow 
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mike in brooklyn Mother Apr 3 09, 07:21 
Cleo_Serapis Hello Michael in Brooklyn,
What a fascinating po... Apr 4 09, 08:43 mike in brooklyn Thanks Clio for the read and the response - much a... Apr 4 09, 12:03 ohsteve Mike, an interesting perspective of the cycle of l... Apr 4 09, 12:40 mike in brooklyn So nice to meet you Steve and Eira - and thanks mu... Apr 4 09, 17:02 Aphrodite Hello Mike,
Such a deeply passionate poem with so... Apr 4 09, 17:48 
mike in brooklyn Thanks much Lindi for reading and commenting and h... Apr 6 09, 08:50 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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