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Windy Bill (metrical revision)
Windy Bill was a cowboy from Butte who so dearly loved beans and his flute. After chow he would blow from his head to his toe. Such a gassy old flute-tooting coot! Peggy Carpenter Harwood Windy Bill (Original) Windy Bill was a cowboy from Butte who dearly loved beans and his flute. After chow he would blow from his head to his toe, that gassy old flute-tooting coot! Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Mar 26 09, 23:19
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Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Ace,
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting!!! I'm glad you really like the last line!! I really like that one very much too. As for line 2, it is eight syllables long and should be nine syllables, so I'm leaving it as it is. As for dropping the "s" in "toes," I think you have a good idea there, so I'm going to take your suggestion. Thank you!! Again, thanks for reading and commenting!!! Much appreciated!!! Peggy ······· ······· |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Windy Bill (metrical revision 16 May 2009) Mar 22 09, 05:15 
ohsteve Peggy, Wonderful ROFLMAO... this is my smile for ... Mar 22 09, 14:40 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Steve,
I'm so glad you liked it!!... Mar 23 09, 20:44 ace Peggy:
Like Steve...love it.
Naturally two... Mar 26 09, 15:34 Arnfinn G'day Peg
Whoooeeee. He He.
Got a... Mar 28 09, 04:56 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
Ha! So glad you enjoyed it!... Mar 28 09, 09:42 Psyche HAHAHA....Peggy!!!! Great limerick... Apr 22 09, 19:53 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Syl,
I'm so glad you like it!! I ... Apr 24 09, 11:22 Marc-Andre Germain Peggy,
This is a well-crafted limerick. I've ... May 5 09, 10:18 Cleo_Serapis Ha ha ha Peggy!
I think I might have one s... May 5 09, 19:26 Peterpan Hi Peggy~
Do you see how you get all the males go... May 6 09, 04:19 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi folks,
I'm sorry I am so late responding a... May 16 09, 04:03 Cleo_Serapis YAY Peggy!
I think this is it - the rhythms... May 16 09, 07:52 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo,
Thanks so much for your help!!... May 16 09, 08:17 Larry Hello Peggy,
Verrrrry funny. I love a good limer... May 16 09, 13:51 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Larry,
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