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 Mar 11 09, 10:22
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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in  |
Man From Cork
There once was a man from County Cork Who loved a fair maiden from York. He wrote her a letter. Then they got together. Now they are expecting the stork! Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Mar 18 09, 16:59
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 Babylonian Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty |
Peggy:
You know, you are completely right to retain "county Cork"; too much context are contained therein. You might remove "once". Good as is, however. ace |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Man From Cork Mar 11 09, 10:22 
Cleo_Serapis Ha ha ha Peggy!
Too funny - enjoyed your lim... Mar 12 09, 05:33 ace Peggy:
Agree with Cleo...both on the rhythm ... Mar 12 09, 16:13 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo and Ace,
I'm glad you think this is f... Mar 12 09, 17:39 
Arnfinn G'day Peg,
Very enjoyable and funny.
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