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JaxMyth
post Dec 30 08, 08:05
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Drab-olive water dimples. It is the slack on low water. Boats fret and jerk at their moorings. Gulls squabble. The trees pulse a cicada tinnitus that dulls the burble of the oyster punts. The sun becomes heavy and I move my arm off the balcony rail and onto the table. You smile and I smile. The Veuve Clicquot tastes like velvet toast.

slack water
a cicada shell
spirals slowly



Dessert. You have chosen zabaglione. I fuss with the menu, and choose what I always choose. You laugh, softly. Annoyed, I look out past the glints sliding across the flats. There, asleep in the mud, tenders, clinker-built and unemployed, dream. A fresh tang of salt cuts through decay and the mad run of the flood tide has begun. “Look!” I point. “Glad tidings ready to slap those tenders awake.” You reach, glide your hand across my cheek and whisper: “I’m more than me!”

flood tide
the mangroves walk into deeper water


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Peterpan
post Dec 31 08, 04:20
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Real Name: Beverleigh Gail Annegarn
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Hi - I have always enjoyed your writings.

This leaves me with a warm feeling inside. A contentment, shared.

Thank you.

Happy New Year!

Bev

PS
We are coming over to Perth in April and to dive at The Great Barrier Reef for two weeks.


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