 Shadows of the Soul, Free verse - or structured? someone please tell me. |
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 Oct 9 08, 06:15
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 783 Joined: 24-July 07 From: South Africa Member No.: 457 Real Name: Walter Schwim Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Mistral  |
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Oct 9 08, 16:16
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Wally,
It is certainly structured, as Syl says, altho that may not be rigid throughout. It is a very good write, my only nit is that the last verse is missing its final line, not in a "sense" sense, but a physical one ! Written from the viewpoint of a conscience ! Wow. love Alan ······· ······· |
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Thoth Shadows of the Soul Oct 9 08, 06:15 
Psyche Hi Thoth!
I don't know whether I should b... Oct 9 08, 15:51 ohsteve Wally, this has a definite rhythm to it and a very... Oct 10 08, 12:42 Psyche LOL.... I'd never heard of a silly-bull counte... Oct 12 08, 12:28 Thoth Thank you all for those comments.
This is just som... Oct 13 08, 12:02 
Psyche Good luck, Wally! My good vibes will reach you... Oct 13 08, 12:29 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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