 TIME GONE COLD, In hearfelt memory of my special Dad |
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 Oct 2 08, 06:16
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry  |
The time has gone, my heart’s grown cold,
I miss your love and stories told, your smiling face, like golden dawn, my heart’s grown cold, the time has gone. Our talks at night, your gentle voice to spill my soul, your ears, my choice, dear dad, your laughter made things right, your gentle voice, our talks at night. How deep the ache through tearful eyes, to know you’ve left, can’t share our ties, a plan from God, your soul to take, through tearful eyes, how deep the ache. For all my life, I will believe your presence guides me, yet I grieve for you to be here; end my strife, I will believe, for all my life. October 2, 2000 I love and miss you Dad.... ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Oct 5 08, 06:55
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Lindi,
You already know how much I adore this poem and am proud to have it included in our upcoming Swap Quatrain collection. It is the raw emotion, the openess, longing and love that makes this one linger - so poignant, one can sense its straight from the heart - the best kind of poems to have read. Hard to believe 8 years now? Wow. HUGS ~Lori 
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Aphrodite TIME GONE COLD Oct 2 08, 06:16 
Aphrodite QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Oct 5 08, 11:55 ) H... Oct 5 08, 13:52 
merle I found this to be a deeply emotive write. I lost... Feb 5 09, 00:32 Aphrodite Hi Merle,
I apologize for just getting back to yo... Oct 3 09, 08:47 Eisa Hi Lindi
I've just called by to say how much ... Feb 17 09, 16:39 Aphrodite QUOTE (Eisa @ Feb 17 09, 22:39 ) Hi Lindi... Oct 3 09, 08:52 mike in brooklyn Hi all Michael here - a newbie
Your heartfelt emo... Apr 3 09, 07:19 Aphrodite QUOTE (mike in brooklyn @ Apr 3 09, 13:19... Oct 3 09, 08:53 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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