 When Mourning Dawns, an older poem of mine |
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 Nov 22 07, 18:13
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 Nomad  Posts: 12 Joined: 1-September 03 From: Mississippi Member No.: 24 Real Name: Poppy Writer of: Poetry  |
When Mourning Dawns
All day your name has been against my mind and hurt me like the too frail loveliness of pear blooms in the rain. All night my voice undefined has swung from star to star to call you back. Tomorrow I will know that you can't come and after that I won't know anything but small hard shells against my bare feet and sand upon my lips at dawn. *Just trying to get back into the groove of posting my work and commenting on the work of others, figured this would be a good place to start.* ·······  ·······~Poppy~
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Sep 20 08, 06:48
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 1,802 Joined: 24-April 04 From: Connecticut Member No.: 58 Real Name: Ron Jones Writer of: Poetry |
Dear Miss Lucky Penny,
How close your poem here appeals to my mood. It seems it could have been written just for me. It's says so much about mourning in so few words and so it packs much power. I don't know why, but reading it has somehow lightened my mood. I now can post the piece I wrote my recently passed wife. Cheers, ron jgdittier ······· ······· |
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MissLuckyPenny When Mourning Dawns Nov 22 07, 18:13 
Merlin Hello Poppy,
Tis a good place to be.
I don't ... Nov 22 07, 22:28 Cleo_Serapis Hi Poppy,
Wow - this is pretty intense for a 3 ve... Nov 23 07, 06:31 MissLuckyPenny Thank you, Merlin and Lori, for the kind comments... Nov 23 07, 15:42 Aphrodite Hi Poppy,
This is a very touching and melancholy ... Nov 25 07, 09:25 Xanadu This was a nice read. Only a couple of pics. The f... Nov 25 07, 14:33 4rum MissLuckyPenny;
(love that name)
There was a pe... Nov 27 07, 09:56 Eisa Hi Poppy - It's a real treat to read your work... Jan 5 08, 11:41 Viking Poppy
Don't know if you remember me from Poem... Dec 1 15, 20:53 
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