Revision 10/03/2009
A much better version. Thank you Leo.
White coated aphids
Sucking sap from blithe plum trees.
Hot breeze fans my face.
JohnRevision 23/09/2008
Aphids in white coats.
Hot summer's breeze on my cheek.
Blithe trees: sap sucking.
SUMMER'S DAY
Aphids in white jackets.
Hot summer's breeze on my cheek.
Footsteps: tread gently.John