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Arnfinn
post Sep 3 08, 01:14
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Revision 18/09/2008


Footsteps: tread gently.
Bees a-buzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Aphids in white jackets.
Flowers; confusion of colour.
A hot summer's breeze-
on my cheek.



Revision 6th September 2008


Footsteps; tread gently,
bees a-buzz,
aphid's in white jackets,
flowers, confusions of colour.

A hot summers breeze-
on my cheek.



REVISION. AS summers day 4/9/2008


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i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeever promised YYYYYYYYYYYYYou a Rose Garden. minniemouse.gif

john


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Psyche
post Sep 3 08, 10:41
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