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 Jan 31 08, 12:41
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 All that racket! No use shooting them. Cricket.... Cricket ....Cricket.... billions of them. Not much ammo. Got to consider that, plus the time. The time - Gotta get some shut eye. Now the slamming starts; car doors - back door - heart valves. Bill`s damn dog ain`t gonna stop yapping. Gotta think about the law, while a gravel truck off loads in the back of my head. Still fingering the solution, As it gets lighter In my hand - gun metal tastes like relief. |
  
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May 16 08, 06:24
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congratulations Linda on your Merit placement!
 You have risen up, drank from the Well of Wisdom and have been crowned the ‘bringer of victory’!   Well done! 
·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Xanadu Shut Eye Jan 31 08, 12:41 
Cleo_Serapis Thank you for your entry into Odin's Oppositio... Jan 31 08, 13:04 
Xanadu I am very pleased to have received the Merit Award... May 18 08, 19:32 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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