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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 376 Joined: 28-May 07 From: Co. Galway, Ireland Member No.: 440 Real Name: Terry O C Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Ephiny  |
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Shivered Wen da night fell der wiz I in da dark, an although all alone, eeerrie voices did 'ark; sain, Na'er be a tinking dat tis' all in yer ed, fer t-night an fer all noights ye lie wit da ded! Such da shock an da terror o what I bin told, dat I shook an I trembled as me life's blood ran cold. On dat moonless black noight fer moiles could be 'eard, me las eartly screams bein rip'd o dis world. ORIGINAL Shivered When the night fell there was I in the dark and although all alone errie voices did hark, saying; "Na'er be a thinking that 'tis all in your head for tonight and for all nights you lie with the dead" Such the shock and the terror of what I'd been told, that I shook and I trembled, as my life's blood ran cold. On that moonless black night, for miles could be heard, my last earthly screams being ripped from this world. . ·······  ·······Terry
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Oct 18 07, 07:57
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Terry.. I love the first verse, I should say the first version of this ...shiver me timbers, it be sendin' a chill up me spine...lol...great stuff....
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Oct 19 07, 20:22
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 376 Joined: 28-May 07 From: Co. Galway, Ireland Member No.: 440 Real Name: Terry O C Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Ephiny |
QUOTE (ohsteve @ Oct 18 07, 13:57 ) [snapback]103677[/snapback] Terry.. I love the first verse, I should say the first version of this ...shiver me timbers, it be sendin' a chill up me spine...lol...great stuff.... Steve Ar-Oi !!! Thanks Steve, Mission accomplished...  Not sure about me pirate dialect though??? . ······· ·······Terry
light lights light --Raymond Rosliep "The imagination imitates. It is the critical spirit that creates." --Oscar Wilde MM Award Winner |
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Terocon101 Shivered Oct 14 07, 12:37 
Alan Dear Terry,
Re the accent, it is a bit hard to gt... Oct 28 07, 14:55 Terocon101 Hey Alan,
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