Shivered, Think o "Long John Silver" Options

[Terocon101]

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Shivered

Wen da night fell
der wiz I in da dark,
an although all alone,
eeerrie voices did 'ark;
sain,
Na'er be a tinking
dat tis' all in yer ed,
fer t-night an fer all noights
ye lie wit da ded!

Such da shock an da terror
o what I bin told,
dat I shook an I trembled
as me life's blood ran cold.

On dat moonless black noight
fer moiles could be 'eard,
me las eartly screams
bein rip'd o dis world.

ORIGINAL

Shivered

When the night fell
there was I in the dark
and although all alone
errie voices did hark, saying;

"Na'er be a thinking
that 'tis all in your head
for tonight and for all nights
you lie with the dead"

Such the shock and the terror
of what I'd been told,
that I shook and I trembled,
as my life's blood ran cold.

On that moonless black night,
for miles could be heard,
my last earthly screams
being ripped from this world.

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[Guest_ohsteve_*]

Terry.. I love the first verse, I should say the first version of this ...shiver me timbers, it be sendin' a chill up me spine...lol...great stuff....
Steve