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May 13 05, 10:54
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Septolet
The Septolet consists of seven lines containing fourteen words written in two parts with a break in between them, each part dealing with the same thought… to create one picture (to a degree, somewhat like the concept of haiku/senryu — which contain two snapshots of aspects of the same reality).
I stop
I stop my ears to hear
your fingers singing fragrant pictures, seeing transparent love
© Daniel J Ricketts 30 Nov 2004
just duet
tenor gives orchestra human voice
baritone's antiphon echoes appreciation for soloist… now in harmony
© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004
Thank God
thanks-giving for Blockbusters, football, turkeys, tryptophan… or
gratitude for life, shelter, food, safe family?
© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004
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May 14 05, 00:56
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Hi Daniel,
I love the simplicity of haiku, and this is wonderfully similar in essence. Thanks for introducing it and the examples. Each has an entirely differnt effect on the senses and ideas.
Fran
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May 16 05, 08:19
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Thank you, Fran... I've just rediscovered this form myself and have not yet really gotten a feel for it, but I want to. I hope you'll join me in the quest? Yesterday, amid working on a series of acrostics during this month, I wrote this one in the septolet format:
LADDERS
Look up and simply dare to climb
don't fear even one step... remembering safety
© Daniel J Ricketts 15 May 2005
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May 16 05, 12:05
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Hi Daniel
How will this do?
Poetry
Look down and simply dare to write
not worrying if no one follows
A glimmer of an idea?
Fran
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Jun 24 05, 08:43
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Hey, Fran!
Looks like I got side-tracked again, huh? Sheesh! ... and after asking you to join me in the quest!
It appears that you're one word and one line short on this otherwise good start on your own journey into the Land of Septolet...
solace in solitude
wending trails portend drudgery on lonely trek
adventure anticipates withdrawing peace from secret account
© Daniel J Ricketts 24 June 2005
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Feb 1 06, 17:33
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I’m debating whether I’m dim-witted or simply dull.
You say I’ll need an aye-opener ?
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Feb 17 06, 14:27
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Ooh, I'd forgotten this - thanks, Artesia
I think I was a word and line short cos I was including the title in mine :dunce:
Fran
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Mar 18 13, 13:29
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I've not written one of these for a while... and maybe others might want to give this one a try too?
Here's one I don't think I ever posted (and it's an acrostic... which I normally indicated by making the title ALL CAPS):
ROOFING
Roll out mesh over cracks flashing with tar
if mucked right nothing gets through
© MLee Dickens'son
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Daniel, does this pass muster? It's a double acrostic and the form looks interesting but I know I'll need a lot of practice.
YEARS OF NOTHING
years can elapse to abort reach;
suppose I offer my own, furthering yours along.
Thanks Daniel!
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Hey, Larry... you have an amazing talent for your double-acrostic poems. That takes a kind of mind-juggling I've yet to figure out. Maybe you could pass on to me some technique or trick you utilize to keep your mind focused on the end-product. You've hit the mark for septoleting, methinks... so the ONLY suggestion I'd make is changing your title to YEARS OF NOTHINGdeLighting in your ingenuity, Daniel  Hmmm... and coming back to this, here's my first attempt to follow your lead of a double acrostic septolet: SUCCESS NOT EASYStriving in unison to complete that common cause...
encapsulating criteria so participants see synergy© MLee Dickens'son 2013
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Daniel,
You make it look easy though!
My key: All I do is figure out what I want to and am able to say within the parameters and fill in the blank spaces left by finding just the right word for fit and meaning.
I'll get back to you with my next one.
Larry
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Here is another old piece posted here earlier, but appropriate for this season:
Thank God
thanks-giving for Blockbusters, football, turkeys, tryptophan… or
gratitude for life, shelter, food, safe family?
© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004
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SAY NO TO SOUR SOY
save families and those who yearn for tofu.
Nice dinner obviates tasteless goo. Oy!
I had to reach for this one!
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toe fool? yo no soy *
taudry old toe foo ekes on
filth to outside leaves one's foot too lumpy
*Sp. "I am not"
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PICK AND EAT SOME
Plum pie is not a charming tidbit.
Kings assassinate those who nibble them. Dine?
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Here we are once more with nearly a year and a half without a post so I thought I'd try "Years of Nothing" once more.
YEARS OF NOTHING
Young men escape into another moment,
refusing each second’s ennui. Old men find something.
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Payment Down; Income Up
income tax got confusing when I drew from an IRA
paid down on property
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IN COMES PAYMENT
I stop noticing a cash outlay obtained from
my vulnerable earnings upon satisfactory retirement
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Apr 28 15, 07:43
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TIREMENT
tire changing is more often required for energetic drivers
mechanics emote... but never tire
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Apr 29 15, 15:56
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SEVEN AND THEN TEEN
septolet exchanges with various terse entries can
nest acrostics, because now we double down
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SEPTO-NO STOPS IT
septolets eventually get pusillanimous; do they keep it up?
our antes needn't? I opt out!
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May 3 15, 14:26
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BELIEVE OR DOUBT
by no evidence for “life created” induces two
enduring milieu, visible aplomb… explicit trust
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Sep 8 15, 08:34
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ASTFOTT SSYMSYD
acrostics sometimes take away from a poem
other times they are simply too hard
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Sep 8 15, 15:23
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title it earlier
troublesome is the idea to hinder lackadaisical
efforts, so I insert the title earlier
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Sep 9 15, 02:42
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Behind
When one's behind is larger than friend's face the facts:
you'll never catch up
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Sep 9 15, 21:31
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con dements
ketchup on fries and burgers isn’t good for you
most that aren’t taste great
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dumb down
grate your friends by overwhelming them with puns
word plays make them feel stupid
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Sep 10 15, 18:44
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psycho-logic
stoop id beneath the unconscious masses of mankind
where their education was never retained
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idiot socratic
retain your scents of humor
if few cannot laugh at yourself then who will?
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takes it outside
those who amused you, kept
entertained by us, so the ennui induced took time
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time flies
takes time to create acrostics
I'm about to run out before I run out
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Sep 14 15, 21:47
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fifteen
ran out of fingers counting
but I think your septolet went over by one.
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fourteen
By one word "I am" has been reduced;
I'm sure you'll see my correction.
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correct numbers
Correction offered by you renews calm regarding a limb-
ensconced appendage counted for thumbs
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two thumbs up
thumbs are helpful as the fifth digit
for counting in the decimal's metric system
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Sep 19 15, 23:16
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cooling streams
cisterns’ overturned bucket offered poor ladle use,
immersion criteria necessitates bottom goes downwards
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down can tickle
down words depressing but who's always up?
balloon guys are full of hot air
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Sep 20 15, 23:45
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minor tools
hot aired politicians promise voters everything
to help them strike gold in your shaft.
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little tools
If your shaft is empty drink more water...
sometimes with a little blue pill.
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add verse reaction
Blew pills for allergies with a sneeze, laughing
when Yankovic changed up a song.
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Sep 22 15, 13:55
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Yanking their chain
a song by Weird Al parodies modern culture
pastiche of another's work his signature
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swan’s song
cygnet tours the pond looking for food like mother
by sticking his neck out
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outwitting their opponent the knights forced the king
into the castle crying check mate
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pointless love
mating porcupines must be careful, females can be
convinced or males get the point
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the point of lovemaking widely varies among subjects
some want babies others merely pleasure
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Sep 26 15, 23:00
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pleasure is derived by expressing cognizant thoughts
intelligently to infect the minds of others
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Sep 27 15, 03:31
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mothers who have lost daughters to weddings
could well help them lose their marriages
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Sep 28 15, 21:18
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marriages are unions which legalize procreation,
governmental precepts and biblical concepts; but now… sodomy
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saddle me with difficult last lines?
feels like a challenge with one happy ending
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Sep 29 15, 17:37
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end dings happily on car doors
by parking far away from others and walking
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end walking by parking closer to the store
who cares about those little dings
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little things can cause great joy and some relief occasionally;
especially with gastrointestinal movement
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Oct 2 15, 14:59
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movements experienced by earthworms fertilize a field
wild flowers celebrate their relief of effort
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Oct 3 15, 23:11
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effortless without toil flowers paint their world
men try vainly for decades to equal
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two Equals is equivalent to about six sugar packets
be prepared for sweet tea
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Oct 5 15, 22:57
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tea brewing is an art form seldom used correctly
it’s just too much strain
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strain your food while digestion problem resolves
baby food is better than baby poop
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babies poop matches yesterdays food colors but the mixture
of vegetables make smells questionable
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questing the candidates helps you determine action at the polls
listen carefully then vote
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Oct 8 15, 17:39
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uninformed voting is like playing Russian roulette with freedom’s quest
remember Don Quixote’s story.
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Oct 9 15, 07:15
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stories told by sages are remembered for their details
their lessons sneak in wisdom
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Oct 11 15, 23:41
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wisdom tooth extraction doesn’t lessen mental capabilities
but even with Novocain the process smarts
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Oct 12 15, 11:17
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smarts never prevent expanding a septolet to eight lines...
and they enable simple compression
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Oct 13 15, 22:39
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compression of octolets make septolets but long
mistakes need apologies and they are forthcoming
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Oct 15 15, 03:43
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fourth-coming race-horses are no-shows
for money it's first second or third
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Oct 15 15, 21:55
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third time’s the charm when you played second fiddle
after becoming the first’s victim
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Oct 17 15, 16:05
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victimize once and you'll lose many friends
those remaining will keep a safe distance
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Oct 20 15, 22:32
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this dance abrades causing heat inside
but the finale needs a bed and shower
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Oct 21 15, 09:46
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end shower with cold water so that you won't sweat
dry body with towel
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Oct 22 15, 22:04
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towels work well drying people after showers
they also work wet, it’s a snap
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Oct 23 15, 04:30
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it's a snap you'll turn red when they unsnap
I recommend using good zippers
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Oct 24 15, 23:01
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Zippos are great lighters especially wind proof ones
but useless when you’ve quit smoking
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Nov 11 15, 22:07
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smoking newspaper often bursts forth into a hot fire
helpful kindling on rainy days
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Nov 12 15, 13:28
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days become shorter after equinox and I wonder
where’s the daylight that we saved
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Nov 13 15, 10:00
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save summer money so you can buy light in winter:
day light savings time
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Nov 14 15, 23:42
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time, like gravity, is always there waiting
to apply pressure to mind and body
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Nov 16 15, 10:36
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bawdy productions sell many tickets because of men's hearts
darkness in light packages crackles
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Nov 16 15, 19:25
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crackers are wrapped in translucent waxed paper
strippers similarly wrapped will keep men rapt
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Nov 17 15, 06:21
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rapped fingers are to keep them off the wrappers
strippers aren't touched by yours
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Nov 17 15, 13:47
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yours will become theirs without locks might mean
the bald are susceptible to theft
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Nov 18 15, 06:56
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theft of hair is somewhat over my head
tickets to observe must be scalped
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Nov 19 15, 00:36
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Thanks for the belly-laugh Daniel. I'll have to get back to you on this one.
Larry
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Nov 19 15, 04:43
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Thank you, Larry! ... and I can hardly wait! deLightingly, Daniel
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Nov 19 15, 08:37
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scalp that’s barren is departed and versatile;
color, style and length are Trump cards
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Nov 19 15, 18:21
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cardiologists play canasta, bridge, poker, Flinch, Mille Bornes
beware those who only do solitaire
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Nov 19 15, 23:59
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solid air exists on gas giants when nitrogen snow
drifts softly into helium lakes
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Nov 20 15, 08:21
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lake freezes solid by early winter
families enjoy skating for three months until meltdown
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Nov 22 15, 17:33
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melt down when duck cooks with feathers
causes hard shell you quack before eating
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Nov 22 15, 20:32
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eating a woasted duck wiff quacked wibs is wike wabbit
owd Ewmuw Fudd substitutes
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Nov 23 15, 08:32
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Hey, Wowi! Gwad you wiked it! deLightingly, Daniel
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Nov 24 15, 23:43
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sub statutes prohibit shore leave in some cities
they’re considered ports of call girls
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Nov 25 15, 08:03
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call girls for the shower planned for Mom?
do they think she's that dirty?
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Nov 26 15, 00:12
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dirty minds exist like some bad photographs
overexposure and way to many graphic f-stops
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Nov 26 15, 02:17
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f-stops: lens adjustments during honeymoon in travel trailer
assures laying correct light on subject
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Dec 1 15, 14:48
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subjective clauses live at the south pole because
unlike Santa they are all biased
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Dec 1 15, 21:16
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buy us another present to give Santa a break
doesn't he have enough work?
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Dec 7 15, 19:28
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working with reindeer that levitate takes planning,
before leaving have them take bathroom breaks
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brakes were passed on by Santa's granddad for sleigh
ever heard of heir brakes?
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