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JustDaniel
post May 13 05, 10:54
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Septolet

The Septolet  consists of seven lines containing fourteen words written in two parts with a break in between them, each part dealing with the same thought… to create one picture (to a degree, somewhat like the concept of haiku/senryu — which contain two snapshots of aspects of the same reality).

I stop


I stop
my ears
to hear

your fingers
singing
fragrant pictures,
seeing transparent love

© Daniel J Ricketts 30 Nov 2004

just duet

tenor
gives orchestra
human voice

baritone's antiphon
echoes appreciation
for soloist…
now in harmony

© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004

Thank God

thanks-giving
for Blockbusters,
football, turkeys,
tryptophan… or

gratitude for life,
shelter, food,
safe family?

© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004


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Guest_Toumai_*
post May 14 05, 00:56
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Hi Daniel,

I love the simplicity of haiku, and this is wonderfully similar in essence. Thanks for introducing it and the examples. Each has an entirely differnt effect on the senses and ideas.

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post May 16 05, 08:19
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Thank you, Fran... I've just rediscovered this form myself and have not yet really gotten a feel for it, but I want to.  I hope you'll join me in the quest? Yesterday, amid working on a series of acrostics during this month, I wrote this one in the septolet format:

LADDERS

Look up
and simply
dare to climb

don't fear
even one step...
remembering
safety

© Daniel J Ricketts 15 May 2005


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post May 16 05, 12:05
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Hi Daniel

How will this do?


Poetry

Look down
and simply
dare to write

not worrying
if no one
follows



A glimmer of an idea?

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post Jun 24 05, 08:43
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Hey, Fran!

Looks like I got side-tracked again, huh?  Sheesh! ... and after asking you to join me in the quest!

It appears that you're one word and one line short on this otherwise good start on your own journey into the Land of Septolet...

solace in solitude

wending trails
portend drudgery
on lonely trek

adventure
anticipates  
withdrawing peace
from secret account


© Daniel J Ricketts 24 June 2005


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post Feb 1 06, 17:33
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I’m debating
whether
I’m dim-witted
or simply dull.

You say
I’ll need
an aye-opener ?


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post Feb 17 06, 13:37
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Just Daniel,

This is toooooooooooo cute.......ArtesiaMeeks wave.gif  :wave:  :wave:
 
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post Feb 17 06, 14:27
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Ooh, I'd forgotten this - thanks, Artesia

I think I was a word and line short cos I was including the title in mine  :dunce:

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post Mar 18 13, 13:29
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I've not written one of these for a while... and maybe others might want to give this one a try too?

Here's one I don't think I ever posted (and it's an acrostic... which I normally indicated by making the title ALL CAPS):

ROOFING

Roll
out mesh
over cracks
flashing with tar

if mucked right
nothing
gets through


© MLee Dickens'son




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post Mar 18 13, 15:35
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Daniel, does this pass muster? It's a double acrostic and the form looks interesting but I know I'll need a lot of practice.


YEARS OF NOTHING

years can
elapse to
abort
reach;

suppose I
offer my own,
furthering yours along.


Thanks Daniel!


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post Mar 18 13, 15:41
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Hey, Larry...

you have an amazing talent for your double-acrostic poems. That takes a kind of mind-juggling I've yet to figure out. Maybe you could pass on to me some technique or trick you utilize to keep your mind focused on the end-product.

You've hit the mark for septoleting, methinks... so the ONLY suggestion I'd make is changing your title to

YEARS OF NOTHING

deLighting in your ingenuity, Daniel sun.gif


Hmmm... and coming back to this, here's my first attempt to follow your lead of a double acrostic septolet:


SUCCESS NOT EASY


Striving in
unison to
complete that
common cause...

encapsulating criteria
so participants
see synergy


© MLee Dickens'son 2013


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post Mar 18 13, 16:03
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Daniel,

You make it look easy though!

My key: All I do is figure out what I want to and am able to say within the parameters and fill in the blank spaces left by finding just the right word for fit and meaning.

I'll get back to you with my next one.

Larry


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post Nov 24 13, 20:43
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Here is another old piece posted here earlier, but appropriate for this season:

Thank God

thanks-giving
for Blockbusters,
football, turkeys,
tryptophan… or

gratitude for life,
shelter, food,
safe family?

© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004


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post Dec 3 13, 00:31
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SAY NO TO SOUR SOY

save families
and those who
yearn for tofu.

Nice dinner
obviates
tasteless goo.
Oy!


I had to reach for this one!


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post Dec 8 13, 20:27
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toe fool? yo no soy *

taudry
old toe foo
ekes on

filth to
outside leaves
one's foot too
lumpy



*Sp. "I am not"


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PICK AND EAT SOME

Plum pie
is not a
charming tidbit.

Kings
assassinate those who
nibble them.
Dine?


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post Apr 21 15, 13:12
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Here we are once more with nearly a year and a half without a post so I thought I'd try "Years of Nothing" once more.

YEARS OF NOTHING

Young men
escape into
another moment,

refusing each
second’s ennui.
Old men
find something.


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Payment Down; Income Up

income tax
got confusing
when I drew
from an IRA

paid
down on
property


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post Apr 27 15, 23:53
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IN COMES PAYMENT

I stop
noticing a
cash outlay
obtained from

my vulnerable
earnings upon
satisfactory retirement



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post Apr 28 15, 07:43
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TIREMENT

tire changing
is more often
required for
energetic drivers

mechanics
emote... but
never
tire


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post Apr 29 15, 15:56
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SEVEN AND THEN TEEN


septolet
exchanges with
various terse
entries can

nest
acrostics, because
now we
double down


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SEPTO-NO STOPS IT

septolets
eventually get
pusillanimous; do
they keep it up?

our antes
needn't? I
opt out!


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BELIEVE OR DOUBT

by no
evidence for
life created
induces two

enduring milieu,
visible aplomb
explicit trust


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ASTFOTT SSYMSYD

acrostics
sometimes
take away
from a poem

other times
they are simply
too hard


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title it earlier

troublesome
is the idea
to hinder
lackadaisical

efforts, so I
insert the
title earlier



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Behind

When one's behind
is larger
than friend's
face the facts:

you'll
never
catch up


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con dements

ketchup
on fries
and burgers
isn’t good for you

most that aren’t
taste
great


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dumb down

grate
your friends
by overwhelming
them with puns

word plays
make them feel
stupid


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psycho-logic

stoop id
beneath the
unconscious
masses of mankind

where their education
was never
retained


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idiot socratic

retain
your scents
of humor

if few
cannot laugh
at yourself
then who will?


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takes it outside

those who
amused you,
kept

entertained by us,
so the ennui
induced
took time


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time flies

takes time
to create
acrostics

I'm
about to
run out
before I
run out


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fifteen

ran out
of fingers
counting

but I think
your septolet
went over
by one.


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fourteen

By one word
"I am"
has been
reduced;

I'm sure
you'll see
my correction.


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correct numbers

Correction
offered by you
renews calm
regarding a limb-

ensconced appendage
counted for
thumbs


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two thumbs up

thumbs
are helpful
as the fifth
digit

for counting
in the decimal's
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cooling streams

cisterns’
overturned bucket
offered poor
ladle use,

immersion criteria
necessitates bottom
goes downwards


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down can tickle

down words
depressing
but who's
always up?

balloon guys
are full of
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post Sep 20 15, 23:45
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minor tools

hot aired
politicians
promise voters
everything

to help them
strike gold
in your shaft.


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post Sep 21 15, 07:47
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little tools

If your shaft
is empty
drink more
water...

sometimes
with a little
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post Sep 22 15, 12:31
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add verse reaction

Blew pills
for allergies
with a sneeze,
laughing

when Yankovic
changed up
a song.


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post Sep 22 15, 13:55
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Yanking their chain

a song
by Weird Al
parodies
modern culture

pastiche
of another's work
his signature


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post Sep 23 15, 18:17
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swan’s song

cygnet tours
the pond
looking for food
like mother

by sticking
his neck
out


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post Sep 24 15, 08:06
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outwitting
their opponent
the knights
forced the king

into the castle
crying check
mate


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post Sep 24 15, 14:45
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pointless love

mating
porcupines
must be careful,
females can be

convinced
or males get
the point


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post Sep 25 15, 00:33
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the point
of lovemaking
widely varies
among subjects

some want babies
others merely
pleasure


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post Sep 26 15, 23:00
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pleasure
is derived
by expressing
cognizant thoughts

intelligently
to infect
the minds of others


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post Sep 27 15, 03:31
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mothers
who have lost
daughters
to weddings

could well help
them lose
their marriages


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post Sep 28 15, 21:18
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marriages are
unions which
legalize
procreation,

governmental precepts
and biblical concepts;
but now… sodomy


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post Sep 28 15, 22:14
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saddle me
with difficult
last lines?

feels like
a challenge
with one
happy ending


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post Sep 29 15, 17:37
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end dings
happily
on car doors

by parking
far away
from others
and walking


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end walking
by parking
closer to
the store

who cares
about those
little dings



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post Oct 1 15, 14:41
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little things
can cause great joy
and some relief
occasionally;


especially
with gastrointestinal
movement


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movements
experienced
by earthworms
fertilize a field

wild flowers
celebrate their relief
of effort


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post Oct 3 15, 23:11
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effortless
without toil
flowers paint
their world

men try vainly
for decades
to equal


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two Equals
is equivalent
to about six
sugar packets

be prepared
for sweet
tea


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post Oct 5 15, 22:57
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tea brewing
is an art form
seldom used
correctly

it’s just
too much
strain


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strain
your food
while digestion
problem resolves

baby food
is better than
baby poop


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post Oct 7 15, 13:05
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babies poop
matches yesterdays
food colors
but the mixture

of vegetables
make smells
questionable


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questing
the candidates
helps you determine
action at the polls

listen
carefully
then vote


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post Oct 8 15, 17:39
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uninformed voting
is like playing
Russian roulette
with freedom’s quest

remember
Don Quixote’s
story.


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stories
told by sages
are remembered
for their details

their lessons
sneak in
wisdom


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wisdom
tooth extraction
doesn’t lessen
mental capabilities

but even
with Novocain
the process
smarts


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smarts
never prevent
expanding a septolet
to eight lines...

and they enable
simple
compression


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post Oct 13 15, 22:39
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compression
of octolets
make septolets
but long

mistakes need
apologies and
they are forthcoming


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fourth-coming
race-horses
are no-shows

for money
it's first
second
or third


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third time’s
the charm
when you played
second fiddle

after becoming
the first’s
victim


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victimize once
and you'll lose
many friends

those remaining
will keep
a safe
distance


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this dance
abrades
causing heat
inside

but the finale
needs a bed
and shower


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end shower
with cold water
so that you
won't sweat

dry
body
with towel


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towels
work well
drying people
after showers

they also
work wet,
it’s a snap


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it's a snap
you'll turn red
when they
unsnap

I recommend
using good
zippers


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Zippos
are great lighters
especially
wind proof ones

but useless
when you’ve quit
smoking


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smoking
newspaper
often bursts forth
into a hot fire

helpful
kindling
on rainy days


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days
become shorter
after equinox
and I wonder

where’s the daylight
that we
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save
summer money
so you can buy
light in winter:

day light
savings
time


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time,
like gravity,
is always there
waiting

to apply pressure
to mind and
body


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bawdy
productions
sell many tickets
because of men's hearts

darkness
in light packages
crackles


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crackers
are wrapped
in translucent
waxed paper

strippers
similarly wrapped
will keep men rapt


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rapped
fingers
are to keep them
off the wrappers

strippers
aren't touched
by yours


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yours will
become theirs
without locks
might mean

the bald
are susceptible
to theft


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theft
of hair
is somewhat
over my head

tickets
to observe
must be scalped



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Thanks for the belly-laugh Daniel. I'll have to get back to you on this one.

Larry


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Thank you, Larry!

... and I can hardly wait!

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scalp
that’s barren
is departed
and versatile;

color, style
and length
are Trump cards


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cardiologists
play canasta,
bridge, poker,
Flinch, Mille Bornes

beware those
who only do
solitaire



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solid air
exists on
gas giants
when nitrogen snow

drifts softly
into helium
lakes


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lake
freezes solid
by early winter

families enjoy skating
for three months
until
meltdown


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melt down
when duck
cooks with
feathers

causes hard shell
you quack
before eating


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eating
a woasted duck
wiff quacked wibs
is wike wabbit

owd
Ewmuw Fudd
substitutes


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Hey, Wowi!

Gwad you wiked it!

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sub statutes
prohibit
shore leave
in some cities

they’re considered
ports of
call girls


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call girls
for the shower
planned
for Mom?

do they think
she's that
dirty?


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dirty
minds exist
like some bad
photographs

overexposure
and way to many
graphic f-stops


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f-stops:
lens adjustments
during honeymoon
in travel trailer

assures laying
correct light
on subject


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subjective
clauses live
at the south pole
because

unlike Santa
they are all
biased


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buy us
another present
to give Santa
a break

doesn't he
have enough
work?


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working
with reindeer
that levitate
takes planning,

before leaving
have them take
bathroom breaks


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brakes
were passed on
by Santa's granddad
for sleigh

ever
heard of
heir brakes?



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