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Mar 2 15, 14:38
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arseless
this is matchless fun : soaking Dad with mush snowballs and laughing arse off
Alan
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Mar 2 15, 17:10
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Note, please: many of our entries of late have been far off the mark of faux-ku:
1 Title to be play on words itself 2 BOTH sections of the ku must contain a play on words
bale-out
ass' laugh-off makes a donkey of himself; fails Hee-Haw role call
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Mar 3 15, 00:42
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a maize zing
Hee-Haw roll call fails without Grand-pa's load of corn the show can't suck seed
Any better Daniel?
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Mar 3 15, 11:39
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false adage
the show can suck; see what I have been telling you it must not go on
Alan
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Mar 3 15, 11:54
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don't blow it
must snot go on dripping down my nose? make tissue of it
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Mar 3 15, 15:59
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delicate matters
a tissue napkin is quite insubstantial best snot avoided
Alan
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Mar 4 15, 10:29
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stand-up unstuffed
best snot voided by one with dry humors; often buggers it
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Mar 4 15, 11:23
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Soft Landing
debugging software is pain in proverbial recommend tissue
Alan
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Mar 4 15, 17:19
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the 'ruler' measures
wreck 'o mended unentitled faux-ku: words want to play
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Mar 4 15, 18:17
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buried meanings
words don't want to play desire to not show faces a too grave error
Alan
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Mar 5 15, 23:11
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taken for granite
two in grave errors the gambler was found cheating a worthless marker
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Mar 6 15, 06:25
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underground revealed
too-grave error: masochists' bodies became switched
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Mar 6 15, 23:40
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no bare bear insight
a twitch and bees came attacking the bear who ran but not fur enough
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Mar 8 15, 02:21
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post-hibernation
he has fur enough for an extremely long trip goes head over heels
Alan
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Mar 8 15, 23:32
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headed for ewe
goats head heals over after battling the ram now he's not horny
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Mar 9 15, 02:31
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whether
now it's not hoary but the weatherman predicts the iceman cometh
Alan
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Mar 11 15, 23:20
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u follow g
I. C. E. man came let female aliens go saw sirs as flight risk
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Mar 13 15, 16:57
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weighty responsibility
a sister helpless with poor-dieting sibling; failed him a gain
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Mar 15 15, 14:01
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tongue tide
she flailed him again; and rode that cheeky weapon, serf-ing waves of words
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Mar 17 15, 17:10
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book bombed
surfing waves of words it's more filler than thriller not like nuclear text
Alan
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