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jerryk
post Oct 29 14, 09:40
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No Crossing the Vampire

Hills blend into the brewing night;
this valley becomes the domain
of nocturnal creatures.
Nighthawks, owls, foxes
hunt mice; small lives.
Tonight one more predator
will drink blood--
feed on the soul. Mine.

The first bite stung;
the second one still burns,
but I stand a chance
to avert the third incision
that would condemn me
to a living death.

In the distance drones a bell,
the bell of Saint Boniface church.
It calls the faithful to prayer.
I must find refuge there. I have been
marked . . . and he is coming.

My home no longer is a safe haven;
I have no Christian artifacts and even
worse no faith. A cross?
The church! I remember a church--
and the crossed timber; the symbol
of salvation. Where is my pride,
my skepticism; where is my insolence now?

I glance back. The dark form of the Undead
follows me, and I must hurry, flee.
Oh, he is fast! If only I could reach the church.
I will cower before the Redeemer's cross--
seek refuge in his power.

I have wings--or so it seems;
I race the final yards; do not look back!
He is behind me; I feel the icy breath;
the fiery eyes of the hunter boring into me.

One last effort; I run with burning lungs. No door--
but I am inside the House of God. Safe!
Safe? but where is the cross with the contorted
image of the crucified Savior?
Again I hear the bell's but it is miles away

O God! I have entered the old church,
the abandoned one. No crucifix. They had built
a new one! I curse myself, for I should have
known, but I had lost my way long time ago.
I did not care. Religion is for the old
and feeble, so said I. Oh, my lack of faith!

The Undead enters, stands behind me,
and now he grips my shoulders. And now . . .
I do not struggle but offer my throat to savage
teeth, while the distant bell tolls for me.
 
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Psyche
post Nov 7 14, 13:54
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Hi Jerry!
Here I am, in these empty halls of poets of yore (meaning about 2 years ago...LOL).

I've read your poem and have no nits. Don't know whether you expect suggestions, anyway.

That "uncrossed" Vampire has had you in his power since October 29th.! Since you must also be a vampire now, let's suppose that nobody has risked entering your space...good excuse!

In Argentina we don't celebrate Halloween so perhaps I'm safe. It's daytime...
Here we have Carnival, later on during our Autumn.



QUOTE (jerryk @ Oct 29 14, 12:40 ) *
No “Crossing” the Vampire

Hills blend into the brewing night;
this valley becomes the domain
of nocturnal creatures.
Nighthawks, owls, foxes
hunt mice; small lives.
Tonight one more predator
will drink blood--
feed on the soul. Mine.<<<<<<<<Wow, scary!

The first bite stung;
the second one still burns,
but I stand a chance
to avert the third incision
that would condemn me
to a living death.<<<<<<< Three bites necessary? Didn't know.

In the distance drones a bell,
the bell of Saint Boniface church.
It calls the faithful to prayer.
I must find refuge there. I have been
marked . . . and he is coming.

My home no longer is a safe haven;
I have no Christian artifact—and even
worse—no faith. A cross?
The church! I remember a church--
and the crossed timber; the symbol
of salvation. Where is my pride,
my skepticism; where is my insolence now? <<<<<<< There are no atheists in the trenches, comes from the Great War, right? Nicely used here!

I glance back. The dark form of the Undead
follows me, and I must hurry, flee.
Oh, he is fast! If only I could reach the church.
I will cower before the Redeemer’s cross--
seek refuge in his power.

I have wings--or so it seems;
I race the final yards; do not look back!
He is behind me; I feel the icy breath;
the fiery eyes of the hunter boring into me. ghostface.gif

One last effort; I run with burning lungs. No door--
but I am inside the House of God. Safe!
Safe? but where is the cross with the contorted
image of the crucified Savior?
Again I hear the bell—but it is miles away— pumpkin.gif

O God! I have entered the old church,
the abandoned one. No crucifix. They had built
a new one! I curse myself, for I should have
known, but I had lost my way long time ago.
I did not care. Religion is for the old
and feeble, so said I. Oh, my lack of faith! unsure.gif

The Undead enters, stands behind me,
and now he grips my shoulders. And now . . .
I do not struggle but offer my throat to savage
teeth, while the distant bell tolls for me. <<<<<<Whoops! I must get out of here... "And therefore never send to know for whom the BELL tolls; it tolls for THEE" , John Donne. Yuk, thanks for wishes, Jerry, great poem!! Cheers, Syl*** aka Psyche


(Wishing you all a spooky Halloween, ghostface.gif Jerry)


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post Nov 8 14, 08:34
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Hi Sylvia, my most dear fan :)
yeah, the silence on this forum is deafening, but what can we do but try to instill the occasional breath of life in this site. You can't imagine how oft I toyed with the notion to remove it from my computer . . . but there's still something I like about being here.
Well, Halloween's come and gone, and I stored my vampire fangs in safekeeping for another year; but rest assured, next Halloween you will be the first to receive the "bite," even if the long flight in form of a bat kills me--again, lol. Thank you for reading and attaching all those appropriate comments. It's interesting how our minds retain figures of speech like that tolling of the bell; never thought of it as I used it. And, indeed, there are no atheist's in the foxholes or trenches. Now, whenever I experienced danger and fear, way back in the 60's, I would take comfort in a picture of Jacky Kennedy. rolleyes.gif Sylvia, as always, it's been a pleasure talking with you. :) I hope all's well with you and your husband. My best to you,
Jerry
 
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post Feb 24 15, 17:32
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Hi Jerry,

I'm very late replying here - I've been absent for too long.

I enjoyed your poem, written in your engaging style. I find nothing to nit at all. I hope I haven't returned too late for you to read my reply.

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post Feb 26 15, 18:46
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QUOTE (Eisa @ Feb 24 15, 15:32 ) *
Hi Jerry,

I'm very late replying here - I've been absent for too long.

I enjoyed your poem, written in your engaging style. I find nothing to nit at all. I hope I haven't returned too late for you to read my reply.

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Hi Snow,
well, better late than never, lol! Glad to see your comment, for I thought for sure this site was closing down. About once a week I return to see what's going on, and surprise, surprise, there you are. Now that I see signs of life on this site, I shall once again post some of my poetry and offer a comment or two. Thank you for reading my previous, and I shall return. Best to you, woodstock.gif
Jerry

 
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post Mar 3 15, 17:54
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Hi Jerry,

It will be great to read some poetry from you again - bring it on!!!!

Eira


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