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Jul 15 14, 17:01
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help yourself to goodies on the table cloth
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Jul 16 14, 16:59
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clothe yourself ere sitting down to down food bits
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Jul 16 14, 17:08
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blitz wartime desperate eat all you can now
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Jul 16 14, 17:16
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know that fat keeps building around unkempt waists
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Jul 16 14, 18:07
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wastes use drains to gurgle down and far out glug
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Jul 17 14, 11:57
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globs of fat may gurgle out from a stopped drain
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Jul 17 14, 15:44
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drawn butter will ooze from big biscuits and lips
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Jul 17 14, 17:02
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slips are made by many folk in English and tongues forked
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Jul 17 14, 23:37
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freaked out from the blatant disregard for form
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Jul 18 14, 02:07
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from, for, to, if, why, when, where, prepositions aim ?
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Jul 18 14, 02:38
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This is to catch Larry's attention - go to Longfellow's Excelsior thread, where I posted Death to the Litterati at your request !
Love Alan
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Jul 18 14, 06:09
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Alan, I think you already caught Larry's attention with your 1 2 4 5 1 and 1 2 3 5 1 pieces! LOL ... and where is this thread you mention, my friend?? You can always post a LINK when you mention such a think, okay? Thanks in advance. aim to please; you aim too, please, said the sign ~ loo ~
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Jul 18 14, 07:15
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Dear Daniel,
It is in this forum, and I have no idea how to post a link.
Alan
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Jul 18 14, 13:06
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Hi Alan, I have no idea why you were trying to get my attention in this thread about Longfellow's Excelsior but HERE is the link to that thread. I read but didn't comment on your post "DEATH TO THE LITTERATI" over two years ago. It didn't conform to the challenge of using Longfellow's Excelsior as a template so I thought you just posted it to get a chuckle from me. I'm still not sure why you used the "Lanturne" thread or why you would associate the two threads other than they both have to do with KFC. Clue me in on why you chose to utilize aberrant syllabic counts. You must have known that either I or Daniel would catch and comment on it. Help me to understand because I don't believe HWL ever penned a Lanturne so I am at a loss as to where the connection lies. Larry --------------------------------- Now to answer Daniel's last post... look like dad and not like sis, raise lid to piss
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Jul 18 14, 14:22
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puss in boots affects nose and will never fit
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Jul 18 14, 14:39
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Dear LArry,
On the post before. you said :
Where is your poem posted? I'd like to read it.
So I gave it to you, right there, but had no way of knowing you had seen or read it.
And I used one of the back-and-forth threads (Lanturne) which I know you frequent to alert you. Nothing more complex than that. My computer skills are minimal.
Seems I committed a heinous crime.
Alan
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Jul 18 14, 15:01
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Dear Alan... No crime committed. So.... let's teach you how to post a LINK! One way is to type out a title for your link, say, like THIS: Sonnet BrefThen go to the place you want to get attention for, and simply COPY the http address you find in the upper left corner, like THIS: http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=7640That in itself actually provides the LINK, but you can make it easier for your reader by going back to the TITLE of your subject (e.g. Sonnet Bref) and HIGHLIGHT it, then click the link right above that looks like links of a chain, right under "Fonts", and you will see a box come down on your screen. Now RIGHT CLICK and PASTE the http information into that box, and VOILA, you will have a link that looks like this: Sonnet BrefClick the above link, and you'll find it takes you to 'sonnet bref' here in Karnak fit your link with title and we will see WHERE!
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Jul 21 14, 01:52
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where you find this easy it goes it one ear ...
Alan
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Jul 21 14, 12:35
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hear my words and simply try to use them, sir
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Jul 21 14, 13:22
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stir random instrctions into the mess huh ?
Alan
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