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Alan
post Jul 15 14, 17:01
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help
yourself
to goodies
on the table
cloth

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post Jul 16 14, 16:59
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clothe
yourself
ere sitting
down to down food
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post Jul 16 14, 17:08
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blitz
wartime
desperate
eat all you can
now

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post Jul 16 14, 17:16
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know
that fat
keeps building
around unkempt
waists


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post Jul 16 14, 18:07
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wastes
use drains
to gurgle
down and far out
glug

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post Jul 17 14, 11:57
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globs
of fat
may gurgle
out from a stopped
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post Jul 17 14, 15:44
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drawn
butter
will ooze from
big biscuits and
lips


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post Jul 17 14, 17:02
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slips
are made
by many folk
in English and tongues
forked

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post Jul 17 14, 23:37
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freaked
out from
the blatant
disregard for
form


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post Jul 18 14, 02:07
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from,
for, to,
if, why, when,
where, prepositions
aim ?

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post Jul 18 14, 02:38
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This is to catch Larry's attention - go to Longfellow's Excelsior thread, where I posted Death to the Litterati at your request !

Love
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post Jul 18 14, 06:09
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Alan, I think you already caught Larry's attention with your 1 2 4 5 1 and 1 2 3 5 1 pieces! LOL

... and where is this thread you mention, my friend?? You can always post a LINK when you mention such a think, okay? Thanks in advance.


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post Jul 18 14, 07:15
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Dear Daniel,

It is in this forum, and I have no idea how to post a link.

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post Jul 18 14, 13:06
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Hi Alan,

I have no idea why you were trying to get my attention in this thread about Longfellow's Excelsior but
HERE is the link to that thread.

I read but didn't comment on your post "DEATH TO THE LITTERATI" over two years ago. It didn't conform to the
challenge of using Longfellow's Excelsior as a template so I thought you just posted it to get a chuckle from me.

I'm still not sure why you used the "Lanturne" thread or why you would associate the two threads other than they
both have to do with KFC. Clue me in on why you chose to utilize aberrant syllabic counts. You must have known
that either I or Daniel would catch and comment on it. Help me to understand because I don't believe HWL ever
penned a Lanturne so I am at a loss as to where the connection lies.

Larry

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Now to answer Daniel's last post...


look
like dad
and not like
sis, raise lid to
piss


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post Jul 18 14, 14:22
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puss
in boots
affects nose
and will never
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post Jul 18 14, 14:39
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Dear LArry,

On the post before. you said :

Where is your poem posted? I'd like to read it.

So I gave it to you, right there, but had no way of knowing you had seen or read it.

And I used one of the back-and-forth threads (Lanturne) which I know you frequent to alert you. Nothing more complex than that. My computer skills are minimal.

Seems I committed a heinous crime.

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post Jul 18 14, 15:01
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Dear Alan...

No crime committed. So.... let's teach you how to post a LINK!

One way is to type out a title for your link, say, like THIS: Sonnet Bref
Then go to the place you want to get attention for, and simply COPY the http address you find in the upper left corner, like THIS: http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=7640

That in itself actually provides the LINK, but you can make it easier for your reader by going back to the TITLE of your subject (e.g. Sonnet Bref) and HIGHLIGHT it, then click the link right above that looks like links of a chain, right under "Fonts", and you will see a box come down on your screen. Now RIGHT CLICK and PASTE the http information into that box, and VOILA, you will have a link that looks like this:

Sonnet Bref


Click the above link, and you'll find it takes you to 'sonnet bref' here in Karnak


fit
your link
with title
and we will see
WHERE!


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post Jul 21 14, 01:52
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where
you find
this easy
it goes it one
ear ...

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post Jul 21 14, 12:35
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hear
my words
and simply
try to use them,
sir


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post Jul 21 14, 13:22
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stir
random
instrctions
into the mess
huh ?

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