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Jan 26 23, 16:22
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grins left memories for Larry of his dear bride what more could one ask? slowly-developed friendship creates the best kind of love
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Jan 30 23, 08:58
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The best kind of love is one that is never planned; it’s sent from above and the feelings brought are grand with vows and a wedding band.
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Jan 30 23, 17:21
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the wedding's been banned her father didn't like him and put his foot down splashing the mud in his face and ruined her wedding dress
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Feb 1 23, 21:16
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Ruined wedding dress caused some trouble with the bride. Now she must confess it was to save daddy’s pride and the bump she couldn’t hide.
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Feb 2 23, 13:25
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With her bump showing and now leaky breasts growing it was obvious Not wearing white gown for us but down the aisle she's glowing
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Feb 5 23, 00:29
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Glowing down the aisle, she hangs on daddy’s left arm. Behind veil's a smile; for he will keep her from harm or there’ll be a fecal storm.
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Feb 5 23, 07:22
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morning's fecal storm down the hall to the bathroom will this be the norm? bride wonders about her groom while she's seeking mop and broom
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Feb 7 23, 01:41
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Searched for broom and mop to clean up the bathroom hall but it doesn’t stop. Though her spouse is still in thrall, he knows she can’t cook at all.
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Feb 8 23, 13:38
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his poor bride can't cook but he's still very thankful outside the kitchen she's handy in the bedroom and snuggles in living room
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Feb 11 23, 20:22
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A snuggling room may be somewhere in the house where a bride and groom can be loud or like a mouse; but it best be with your spouse.
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Feb 12 23, 07:07
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bedding with your spouse like sheets and pillow cases litter your bedroom it looks rather alarming when you first enter the room
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Feb 19 23, 11:27
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Enter the room first to make sure that all is neat. Avoid being cursed for when your visit’s complete, you’ve lowered the toilet seat.
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Feb 19 23, 15:00
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lowered toilet seat could be inappropriate is yellow liquid visible on the surface? she will likely be pissed off
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Feb 21 23, 11:41
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She will be pissed off and there’s no way to atone so please do not scoff. A wet ass she won’t condone and you may wind up alone.
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Feb 21 23, 19:04
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winding up alone a bachelor's nightmare dreams continue and he hopes that one day she'll be dreaming of him
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Feb 26 23, 09:20
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If she dreams of him when she’s talking in her sleep then chances are slim that she’s the one you should keep; tell her, “Go live with the creep!”
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Feb 26 23, 16:56
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"Go live with the creep, you little double-dealer!" his famous last words before a five-year dry spell; followed her to the desert
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Feb 27 23, 12:18
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Desert follows her with its warmth under the sun but men will concur cold heart at night is no fun; it’s one date and then you’re done.
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Feb 28 23, 16:47
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one date on the dune leaving you with burning heart recovery long from your horrible sunburn a second date unlikely
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Mar 2 23, 09:10
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Likely second date depends on what she wanted. If the first went great and you like what she flaunted, face the future undaunted.
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