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Dec 6 22, 17:56
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lemon is sub-lime but much better than grapefruit try some oranges cutting them and squeezing them into a glass for drinking
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Dec 9 22, 00:36
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A glass for drinking should be clean and unbroken but don’t be clinking them when a toast is spoken or you may wind up chokin’
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Dec 21 22, 18:47
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wind may make you choke running a race into it expecting to win onlookers will understand since you're still wearing your sweats
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Dec 25 22, 11:36
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Wearing sweats to race will soak up perspiration which cools you apace. It’s a bad situation. There’ll be no celebration.
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Dec 26 22, 06:37
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no celebration wearing your sweats in a race that perspiration adds to the weight of the sweats till you come in a cool last
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Dec 27 22, 19:04
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Last place is not cool unless you look for what’s lost. A common sense rule makes one consider the cost to recall where it was tossed.
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Dec 28 22, 01:30
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Recall where you'd tossed while running the marathon when you had been sauced. Remember who you'd heaved on though conclusion was forgone.
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Dec 31 22, 10:15
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Foregone conclusions, much like the fortune teller are just illusions. Much like old Yuri Geller whose sleight of hand is stellar.
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Dec 31 22, 12:04
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stellar sleight of hand by Penn who's the real teller; Teller never tells but together their magic outshines contemporaries
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Jan 1 23, 09:59
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Contemporaries may exist at the same time but their skill varies and they often fail to climb to the top where it’s sublime.
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Jan 1 23, 13:53
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top tea brews sub-lime giving it a citrus bite add a few crumpets for a fine English breakfast or an American brunch
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Jan 4 23, 10:36
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American brunch? Is that a late breakfast time or tardiness’ scrunch. to cover a verbal crime? Let’s do “Linner” on my dime!
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Jan 7 23, 17:13
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"linner"? ain't no such! brunch between breakfast and lunch! been under a rock? next you'll tell me there's "lupper" but suggest you have dinner
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Jan 12 23, 13:15
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I will have dinner when some people call it lunch but never Brynner because Yul may want to punch. Supper’s always a winner!
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Jan 12 23, 17:24
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supper in winter can be very cold outside best to stay inside perhaps next to your fireplace filled with flaming cherry logs
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Jan 20 23, 10:39
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Flaming cheery logs may keep you warm when it’s cold as well as your dogs but loneliness will enfold when you have no one to hold.
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Jan 20 23, 20:57
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with no one to hold settle for a cigarette smoke will encircle all of your swirling feelings 'til they vanish in a fog
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Jan 24 23, 01:21
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Vanished in a fog is where your memories hide and no one can jog precious thoughts you are denied ‘till you don’t know your own bride.
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Jan 24 23, 10:21
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not knowing your bride the shotgun gave you no choice you were mistaken both for some other suitor and that you didn't know her
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Jan 25 23, 22:54
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I didn’t know her until we became good friends. Now, life is a blur and missing her never ends but the memories bring grins.
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