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Nov 5 22, 15:35
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to improve our world we should step aside from it to remove the stink perhaps the new atmosphere won't be so devastating
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Nov 7 22, 21:13
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Devastating want is a goal for which some strive although others flaunt their excess when they arrive. Waste would keep millions alive.
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Nov 8 22, 11:27
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waste will keep alive millions of egregious germs stacked in your dung heap cover them with fallen leaves composting them for garden
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Nov 9 22, 20:25
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Compost for garden must be regularly turned or it will harden. All human waste must be spurned or veggie sprouts will get burned.
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Nov 10 22, 14:27
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unburned veggie sprouts mature to delicious food 'midst well-turned compost unfortunately some folks think all veggies taste like crap
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Nov 13 22, 11:17
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“Veggies taste like crap!” is a bad cooks’ reasoning, They need a hard slap and the proper seasoning to give veggies a real zing.
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Nov 13 22, 12:26
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veggies with a zing give the register cha-ching in local cafe chef gives menu an upswing out of his secret attaché
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Nov 14 22, 12:25
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The secrets attached to the oaths that you may swear must always be matched with the truths you’ll never share to keep your heart and mind square.
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Nov 14 22, 12:30
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if your mind is square one wonders what's found in there is the cupboard bare? must it now be re-minded since its contents seem blinded?
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Nov 16 22, 10:19
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Content to be blind to the jests of an old friend who, with his keen mind, pens his quips without an end. I’ve laughed and sometimes just grinned.
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Nov 18 22, 12:06
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I've sometimes just grinned but often have been chagrined his words come unpinned If they would hold together they could last through the weather
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Nov 19 22, 10:27
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This weather can last until the winter has passed and then in the spring we’ll feel like having a fling if we can keep the car gassed.
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Nov 20 22, 12:22
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if your car is gassed it sounds like it will not last throughout the winter but will sputter and splinter you'd better replace it fast
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Nov 22 22, 00:16
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Fast replacements will cost you a lot of money and that briefest thrill may be eggs that are runny left by the Easter Bunny
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Nov 22 22, 08:26
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your Easter Bunny appears to be very late perhaps your Santa will show up some time in May and pick a bouquet for you
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Nov 26 22, 12:41
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You pick a bouquet from the roses you’ve planted and that is okay but don’t take them for granted. Cut each stem with shears slanted.
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Nov 26 22, 14:56
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stems carefully cut to create a rose bouquet love poem attached underscoring importance of her deep intimacy
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Nov 29 22, 11:14
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True intimacy is difficult to achieve. Two reasons might be that some may try to deceive while others just don’t believe.
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Nov 29 22, 11:20
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who'd ever believe love from a wilted bouquet though roses are red any color would have done for producing aged doubt
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Nov 30 22, 20:58
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Age produced some doubt but memories etched by time are what love’s about. Life in intimacy’s clime, when shared, is always sublime.
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