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Jul 25 14, 07:31
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heading for a thrash all-night rave in farmer's barn make hay while sun's down
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Jul 25 14, 19:50
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haymaker son's down for the last count on canvas; picture a 10-count
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Jul 26 14, 03:09
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picture a sawbuck Warhol "creativity" modern, but not art
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Jul 26 14, 09:46
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mowed down but not art, the cornfield paths intersect; roads to nowhere
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Jul 26 14, 11:21
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the roads to nowhere are deceptively disguised all start right at birth
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Jul 26 14, 11:47
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birth is a start even for a cynic; nowhere is a place
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Jul 26 14, 11:53
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birth of a cynic saves formal education study war no more
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Jul 27 14, 02:45
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studs are no more; all the stallions have become transsexual
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Jul 27 14, 03:38
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trans-national my birthland made by Hitler not liking mother
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Jul 27 14, 05:18
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unlike its mother the turtle would not shell out; content as old maid
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Jul 28 14, 01:06
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content of old maid sugar and spice, all things nice old rhymes speak sooth
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Jul 28 14, 23:09
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old rimes sink south winter sun heats up the glass a pane in the ice
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Jul 28 14, 23:25
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a pane in the ice caused one skater to slip; a pain in the arse
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Jul 29 14, 01:00
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as plain as your arse do my lies look big in that ? all fabrications
Alan
Forgive the British spelling - so much more resonant, don'tcha think ?
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Jul 29 14, 01:46
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a fab vacation in the British Isles; memories foggy
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Jul 29 14, 14:37
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froggy memories always jump to conclusions a tale with a tail
Sorry Daniel, probably a Faux-ku.
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Jul 29 14, 16:09
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is this a faux-ku ? or a foxy senryu swallow difference
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Jul 30 14, 08:58
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different swallows are aerial acrobats gulping down insects
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Jul 30 14, 09:34
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swallowing insects is the prime purpose of life : swooping, diving flocks
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Jul 30 14, 13:11
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flocks dive in the swamp fish lay eggs in the shallows links in life's long chain
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