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Jul 8 14, 20:38
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weathering the storm, hounds howl under a gum; bark up the wrong tree
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Jul 15 14, 10:17
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the tree bark is wrong littering the barren field forests for flooring
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Jul 15 14, 17:14
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forests to flooring avant-garde designer's schtick then, it's good to burn
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Jul 16 14, 17:12
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old oak flooring burns beautifully in ancient stone; a night at the hearth
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Jul 16 14, 17:14
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a night at the trough for gourmands but not gourmets feeding time for pigs
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Jul 16 14, 17:31
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feeding time for pigs... a time to dump leftovers in their filthy pen
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Jul 16 14, 18:03
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in my filthy pen are some obscene images writ down, writ follows
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Jul 17 14, 11:51
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written wrist fellows are those who tend to forget; poor man's crib sheets
please forgive the fact this is not a haiku, but a senryu
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Jul 17 14, 16:55
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a poor man's rib sucks borrowed by God almighty female of species
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Jul 17 14, 23:49
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specious females deceptively beautiful God still ribs mankind
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Jul 18 14, 02:05
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'Good' will rob mankind of self-determination to be good - or bad
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Jul 18 14, 06:01
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two bees got in bed but only droned through the night; neither was a queen
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Jul 18 14, 13:16
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a queen in ether mounted for the last time pinned but not pined
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Jul 18 14, 14:34
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pinned to a pine... a monarch butterfly displayed by some sap
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Jul 21 14, 17:03
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some sap may display ancient unwary insects anchored in amber
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Jul 22 14, 04:48
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amber anchovies slather Italian pizza; oil is swell
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Jul 22 14, 16:31
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swell is oil straight from the smelly bilges ship and stomach churn
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Jul 23 14, 10:04
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ships churn stomachs waves crashing on the deck wash away results
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Jul 23 14, 11:06
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results washed away like king's castles in the sand imagination
Alan
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Jul 23 14, 12:52
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imagine nation fixed on Indy pendants... heading for a crash
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