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Jun 10 13, 09:49
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water-cooled engines for horse-drawn carriages... local water hole
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Jun 11 13, 15:30
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local water holes common sights in the old days fishing and swimming
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Jun 12 13, 06:56
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swimming for fish a hungry shark stalks the school; paedopisciac ?
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Jun 12 13, 08:40
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Daniel, Nice word coinage. I even tried to look it up but there is no such thing. There should be, though! I'll have to get back to you on the "return Haiku"!
Larry
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Jun 12 13, 12:21
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Thank you, Larry.... I thought you'd enjoy that!!! Sorry if I put you to too much research!!! deLightingly, Daniel
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Jun 12 13, 16:51
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pseudo pieces act like they belong together beat a conundrum
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Jun 12 13, 17:06
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Conan's drummer's beat was Max's E Street Band; Andy Richter blabbed
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Jun 13 13, 13:29
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Andes richter blast was followed by volcanoes earth’s in continents
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Jun 13 13, 14:21
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earth's incontinence overflows the river banks; fertile deposits
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Jun 17 13, 15:47
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depots fur sits still dead animals and tired dogs both begin to smell
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Jun 18 13, 10:06
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booth begins to smell after caller deposits; he had no coins
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Jun 18 13, 17:34
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no coins in fountains wishes are granted sometimes poverty cleans them
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Jun 22 13, 18:13
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Poverty cleans them dignity and hope removed - no trace of respect
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Jun 23 13, 00:08
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no respite of trees deserts go on forever water satiates
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Jul 2 13, 10:16
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water satiates the thirsty willow tree; weep beneath her boughs
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Jul 2 13, 23:59
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weeds beneath her boughs steal moisture and nutrients grass grows by dead trees
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Jul 3 13, 00:48
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death spreads beneath trees layer upon layer; new life emerges
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Jul 4 13, 08:25
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live newt emerges from its cold watery womb a breath of fresh air
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Jul 19 13, 12:21
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a burst of fresh breath from the air conditioner... relief from heat wave
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Jul 19 13, 21:30
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heat wave relief temperature drops as rain pours down - summer showers
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