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Mar 28 13, 12:53
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reflection of shelf in her bathroom vanity; hardly a blush
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Mar 28 13, 15:14
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a hush on broad lea golden trumpets herald Spring silent symphonies
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Mar 29 13, 13:50
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silent symphony: daffodils with blue bells trumpet their hues
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Mar 31 13, 13:00
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trumpeting the blues, Irises show Narcissus the Echo's of love
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Mar 31 13, 19:11
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echoes from above the dark river canyon: a night owl hoots
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Apr 1 13, 22:30
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a night toils in soot burning colors to ashes the sun is Phoenix
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Apr 6 13, 00:31
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sunrise in Phoenix at a poultry farm: smell of burnt feathers
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Apr 6 13, 18:32
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burnished feathers sail weeping willows shroud the shore wood ducks on the pond
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Apr 6 13, 21:56
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ducks wood in the pond: from aggressive lumberjack the beaver escapes
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Apr 11 13, 00:19
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beaver escapades still water makes wood softer the rivers be dammed
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Apr 11 13, 02:55
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the dammed river floods the beaver's neighbor; emotions rise
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Apr 11 13, 14:10
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writhing emotions invitations are scent to anaconda balls
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Apr 11 13, 14:27
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anaconda balls up to get a turkey; make a puddle
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Apr 17 13, 00:13
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a puzzled Mako prey fish school in a large ball with a great white shape
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Apr 18 13, 09:07
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great white shapes
emerge from the waters;
hungry for me?
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Apr 19 13, 09:10
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hungry forms go eeeeee while performing lots of tricks for unknown porpoise
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Apr 19 13, 10:53
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the unknown porpoise allied with the killer whale: man-mauling mammals
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Apr 22 13, 09:09
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mammalian malls stretch the imagination a no-man's land
Thanks, Daniel!
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Apr 22 13, 10:45
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QUOTE (Larry @ Apr 22 13, 10:09 )  mammalian malls stretch the imagination [ - ]
in a no-man's land ~ ~ remember: two separate clauses or phrases plus a break ? nomad's land: a desert that wanders between oases
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Apr 22 13, 14:40
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Thanks Daniel, although I'm sort of a 5-7-5 person, I'll change it!
a sea is between sailors peril and safety lighthouse and harbor
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