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Feb 26 13, 10:42
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tied waves, good buy; they used to be called corn-rows but that's passé
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Feb 26 13, 15:51
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that buck is passing herds of deer by the forest branches are too small
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Feb 26 13, 16:13
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branches wave their small blossoms in the warm spring wind; honey bees erupt
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Mar 2 13, 22:38
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honeybees are up before the sunrise changes a flower's spectrum
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Mar 4 13, 05:03
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a floral spectrum greets cold morning rays; blooming idiots
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Mar 5 13, 11:26
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peridot blooms sing crocus peep through white blankets buds melt winter's heart
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Mar 5 13, 14:00
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bud melts writer's heart by forgetting this basic: two observations
for example, with minimal change:
peridot blooms sing while crocus lift white blankets; buds melt winter's heart
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Mar 5 13, 14:15
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two obverse rations and I, I have given three one's scene, I've now seen
The ideas should also be juxtaposed.
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Mar 5 13, 14:26
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just suppose you see a fine red rose; your friend smells it
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Mar 6 13, 23:08
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small fronds in ewers frame the freshly cut flowers; decorate with death
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Mar 6 13, 23:49
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defoliant death after Agent Orange: two inches fine dust
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Mar 6 13, 23:57
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trenches fine with dust after the monsoon season embedded in souls
No pun intended, Daniel
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Mar 7 13, 00:09
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embossed on soles of the groom's altar shoes: \LAST/ \STAND/
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Mar 10 13, 22:39
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the least tree standing bows in shame over white blooms each carries a cross
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Mar 10 13, 23:37
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caries crisscross his primary dentition; baby teeth suck
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Mar 11 13, 09:33
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teeth by bays are struck endless waves in single file sanding the shorelines
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Mar 11 13, 10:21
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Sandy left Jersey shoreline ruptured and jagged; summer brings the sun
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Mar 11 13, 11:59
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summer's sun brings the shovels to dig out lost lives storm's death toll is grave
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Mar 11 13, 14:08
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dead troll's grave site beneath the covered bridge; nightmare of toadstools
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Mar 11 13, 19:21
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if mares toed knight's stools they'd be difficult to mount and hard to eschew
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