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JustDaniel
post Feb 26 13, 10:42
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tied waves, good buy;
they used to be called corn-rows
but that's passé


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post Feb 26 13, 15:51
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that buck is passing
herds of deer by the forest
branches are too small


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post Feb 26 13, 16:13
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branches wave their small
blossoms in the warm spring wind;
honey bees erupt


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post Mar 2 13, 22:38
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honeybees are up
before the sunrise changes
a flower's spectrum


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post Mar 4 13, 05:03
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a floral spectrum
greets cold morning rays;
blooming idiots


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post Mar 5 13, 11:26
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peridot blooms sing
crocus peep through white blankets
buds melt winter's heart


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post Mar 5 13, 14:00
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bud melts writer's heart
by forgetting this basic:
two observations


for example, with minimal change:

peridot blooms sing
while crocus lift white blankets;
buds melt winter's hear
t


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post Mar 5 13, 14:15
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two obverse rations
and I, I have given three
one's scene, I've now seen


The ideas should also be juxtaposed.


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post Mar 5 13, 14:26
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just suppose
you see a fine red rose;
your friend smells it


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post Mar 6 13, 23:08
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small fronds in ewers
frame the freshly cut flowers;
decorate with death


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post Mar 6 13, 23:49
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defoliant death
after Agent Orange:
two inches fine dust


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post Mar 6 13, 23:57
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trenches fine with dust
after the monsoon season
embedded in souls



No pun intended, Daniel


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post Mar 7 13, 00:09
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embossed on soles
of the groom's altar shoes:
\LAST/ \STAND/



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post Mar 10 13, 22:39
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the least tree standing
bows in shame over white blooms
each carries a cross


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post Mar 10 13, 23:37
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caries crisscross
his primary dentition;
baby teeth suck


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post Mar 11 13, 09:33
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teeth by bays are struck
endless waves in single file
sanding the shorelines


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post Mar 11 13, 10:21
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Sandy left Jersey
shoreline ruptured and jagged;
summer brings the sun


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post Mar 11 13, 11:59
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summer's sun brings the
shovels to dig out lost lives
storm's death toll is grave


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post Mar 11 13, 14:08
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dead troll's grave site
beneath the covered bridge;
nightmare of toadstools


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post Mar 11 13, 19:21
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if mares toed knight's stools
they'd be difficult to mount
and hard to eschew


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