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May 9 12, 08:32
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springs on your feet so you can dunk the ball ? disqualified
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May 9 12, 10:02
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dis qualified espert on de subjec' done talk thru de hat
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May 9 12, 10:48
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dung stuck in hat holds the nest together; robin feeds her young
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May 9 12, 15:37
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robbing feeds her young hawk stands on fresh-killed rabbit flies on eagles' wings
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May 9 12, 16:08
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flies on eagle's wings summer's sad casualty top road kill ever
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May 10 12, 13:47
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rowed over hilltops terraces fall to valleys rice fills empty bowls
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May 10 12, 16:47
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rice fills empty bowls full bowls fill empty stomachs when well-seasoned
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May 10 12, 17:29
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a well-seasoned charcoal barbecue grill; ready for summer
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May 11 12, 00:46
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nature is ready for spring and summer frolics her gambolling lambs
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May 11 12, 08:11
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a dangling limb soon to be kindling; a cold winter
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May 11 12, 14:12
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a cold wind stirs leaves pile against tree trunks hibernating place
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May 11 12, 15:41
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hibernation place does not bear thinking about it's warmer indoors
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May 14 12, 13:48
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warmer air endures icy fingers dissipate melting into springs
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May 14 12, 23:37
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melting into sprigs of holly, mistletoe droops Christmas is over
Alan
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May 15 12, 09:22
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crisp mass of clover -- intense summer sun turns Eire brown
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May 16 12, 00:05
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Eire never browns : heat is reserved for debate all else shower-damped
Alan
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May 16 12, 04:33
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showers dampened her weekend party plans; blossoms wilted
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May 16 12, 07:18
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blossoms are wilting need to stay out of kitchen dandelion soup ?
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May 16 12, 09:25
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a dandelion sloop gentle winds guide fragile ships harbors next year's food
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May 16 12, 10:19
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arbor's next year's food for life within the cocoons; bag worms await
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