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JustDaniel
post Aug 1 23, 01:32
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Crystal's eyelashes
slapped me in the face
my closed-eye kiss


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Larry
post Aug 5 23, 08:28
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my closed-eyed kisses
signal passion’s beginnings
farewells are in death




Thanks Daniel. Is that better?


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post Aug 5 23, 22:25
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Your "haiku" was one continuous statement rather than a "clause" and a "fragment"


farewell to death
when Jesus rose from the grave
second coming soon?



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post Aug 8 23, 09:52
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seconds coming soon
after first helpings are gone;
leftover tour’s next


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post Aug 11 23, 03:22
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leftover tools nixed
bought an all-new Craftsman set
with free replacements


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post Aug 12 23, 01:34
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replacements are free
with an iron-clad guarantee;
time and rust prevail


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post Aug 12 23, 18:08
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time and rust prevails
as bucket begins to leak
with what shall I mend?


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post Aug 18 23, 22:09
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with what shall you mend
when your bucket starts to leak;
bye-bye it and buy


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post Aug 20 23, 20:34
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by buying the bad boy
the ball team hopes to profit
a bet against risk


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post Aug 24 23, 10:11
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a bet against risk
is when you’re holding a straight;
your hopes may be flushed


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post Aug 26 23, 22:27
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Pope may be flushed
while sitting on his throne
turns even more white


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post Aug 28 23, 10:33
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even more white terns
circle the boat when chum’s thrown;
their poop can’t be flushed


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post Aug 29 23, 05:06
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can't flush when he's pooped;
too tired to reach the flusher
or get off his throne


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post Aug 31 23, 11:44
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he got up when thrown
from donkey basketball steed;
scoring from fool court


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post Sep 3 23, 07:22
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fool scoring from court
tossed basketball at the judge
he netted jail time


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post Sep 6 23, 00:35
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knitted on jail time
with long threads from his bed clothes
he’ll climb from this clime


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post Sep 9 23, 09:16
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climbing from his clime
he may not weather the fall;
winter will be worse


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post Sep 12 23, 22:01
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worsted in winter
is good fashion and quite warm;
it can’t be bested


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post Sep 15 23, 08:48
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snow can't be bested
by a raging thunderstorm;
it's a wet blanket


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post Sep 18 23, 09:47
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a wet blanket is
thrown over festivities;
horse race is dry run


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