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Aug 1 23, 01:32
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Crystal's eyelashes slapped me in the face my closed-eye kiss
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Aug 5 23, 08:28
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my closed-eyed kisses signal passion’s beginnings farewells are in death
Thanks Daniel. Is that better?
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Aug 5 23, 22:25
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Your "haiku" was one continuous statement rather than a "clause" and a "fragment"
farewell to death when Jesus rose from the grave second coming soon?
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Aug 8 23, 09:52
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seconds coming soon after first helpings are gone; leftover tour’s next
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Aug 11 23, 03:22
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leftover tools nixed bought an all-new Craftsman set with free replacements
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Aug 12 23, 01:34
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replacements are free with an iron-clad guarantee; time and rust prevail
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Aug 12 23, 18:08
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time and rust prevails as bucket begins to leak with what shall I mend?
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Aug 18 23, 22:09
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with what shall you mend when your bucket starts to leak; bye-bye it and buy
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Aug 20 23, 20:34
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by buying the bad boy the ball team hopes to profit a bet against risk
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Aug 24 23, 10:11
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a bet against risk is when you’re holding a straight; your hopes may be flushed
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Aug 26 23, 22:27
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Pope may be flushed while sitting on his throne turns even more white
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Aug 28 23, 10:33
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even more white terns circle the boat when chum’s thrown; their poop can’t be flushed
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Aug 29 23, 05:06
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can't flush when he's pooped; too tired to reach the flusher or get off his throne
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Aug 31 23, 11:44
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he got up when thrown from donkey basketball steed; scoring from fool court
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Sep 3 23, 07:22
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fool scoring from court tossed basketball at the judge he netted jail time
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Sep 6 23, 00:35
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knitted on jail time with long threads from his bed clothes he’ll climb from this clime
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Sep 9 23, 09:16
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climbing from his clime he may not weather the fall; winter will be worse
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Sep 12 23, 22:01
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worsted in winter is good fashion and quite warm; it can’t be bested
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Sep 15 23, 08:48
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snow can't be bested by a raging thunderstorm; it's a wet blanket
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Sep 18 23, 09:47
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a wet blanket is thrown over festivities; horse race is dry run
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