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May 3 18, 12:38
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feathers a light day for the nest-sitting father; fledglings flight-ready
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May 3 18, 21:24
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flight-ready fledglings perch on the edge of the nest; they’re grasping at straws
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May 4 18, 12:29
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it's gasping at straw sucked in from the mare's nipple; foal struggled to breathe
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May 4 18, 22:56
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foal struggled to breathe in the protective birth sac; horse’s hoofs are sharp
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May 5 18, 00:16
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horse shoes are dull but their mere weight can cut you; don't stand near the stake
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May 6 18, 15:51
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don’t stand near the snake when it’s coiled up for a strike; listen for rattles
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May 6 18, 19:17
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list'ning for rattles the snatcher quietly stalked; a pram disappears
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May 7 18, 22:26
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apron disappears from the male honey bear’s chest; walking on four legs
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May 8 18, 09:26
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walking on forelegs the circus bear brought applause; her two legs waved back
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May 8 18, 21:07
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her legs waved two back after killing the first wolf; they donned sheep’s clothing
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May 10 18, 08:49
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Don wears sheep's clothing but inside he is a Trump; who knows what he'll do?
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May 11 18, 07:17
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he’ll know who does what using his keen sense of smell; you’re in bear country
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May 11 18, 10:09
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yore in bare country was a nudist colony; mosquito heyday
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May 14 18, 13:50
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mosquito hay day can be brought to an end by citronella’s scythe
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May 14 18, 16:41
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citronella's sythe cuts through the evening air; mosquitoes run scared
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May 15 18, 14:07
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run scared mosquitoes, sterile males are on the way; count eggs that won’t hatch
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May 16 18, 07:12
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three eggs in the batch hatch after robin nurtures them; sings blues for the fourth
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May 18 18, 21:07
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sings forth for the blues in the avian kingdom; Jays need voice lessons
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May 19 18, 11:42
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chats need voice lessons; yellow-breasted warblers are insectivorous
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May 20 18, 22:03
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insect over us is caught in a spider’s web; it is whine and dine
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