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Jul 18 17, 17:36
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too-tight jeans cause pants gathering at abdomen; makes it hard to breathe
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Jul 20 17, 12:59
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Makos heard to breathe the salt water filled with blood; that is all they left
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Jul 21 17, 06:50
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Makos turning left show you the right way to go; go very quickly
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Jul 21 17, 13:57
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go very quickly when you’re outrunning a lion; climbing trees won’t help
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Jul 21 17, 15:16
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climbing tree won't help unless there's a tree-house there; slam door on lion
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Jul 24 17, 17:56
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lion on lambs door, sleeping there with no malice; a revelation
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Jul 25 17, 13:24
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john's revelation: windblown outhouse door strikes skunk who outdoes contents
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Jul 26 17, 17:51
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out-door who concerts keep the neighborhood awake; great horns are a hoot
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Jul 29 17, 11:46
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great horney toad's foot has spikes like its bony head; he's hard to swallow
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Jul 31 17, 08:12
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he’s heard two swallows flew back to Capistrano; they were early birds
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Jul 31 17, 14:12
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the earliest birds are the ones that get worms; they must be dewormed
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Aug 2 17, 23:44
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the worms must be just when we all face the music; decomposition
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Aug 4 17, 10:32
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decomposition stirs the heart of a leaf pile; the garden's life blood
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Aug 4 17, 16:09
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the garden’s life blood can’t be seen when turning soil; it just makes more worms
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Aug 4 17, 23:13
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you can't make more worms; they just turn up when you turn the compost over
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Aug 7 17, 07:38
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the compost covers the cold dead leaves and grasses; heating was a gas
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Aug 7 17, 18:30
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gas does the heating; it's both caused by and causes break-down of garbage
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Aug 9 17, 09:12
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breakdown of garbage depends on the nematodes; some toads call it home
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Aug 9 17, 10:28
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do toads call them home to have something to eat? can't worm out of it
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Aug 10 17, 14:17
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wormed out of its can because there was no food left; eschewed its anus
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