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JustDaniel
post Jun 14 15, 11:26
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whelps spice up your life
according to 'Fifty Shades'...
(I haven't read it.)


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post Jun 14 15, 13:54
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it has a red eye
when stalking in the forest
you better not blink


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post Jun 14 15, 22:50
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a butter nut winks
at a vanilla bean;
ice cream flavor born


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post Jun 18 15, 12:33
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flavors scream "I burn."
peppers the color of flames
habanero sauce


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post Jun 22 15, 08:51
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hibernating suits
most varieties of bear;
future fireplace rug


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post Jun 23 15, 13:23
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fire rubs future's place
with the charcoal of the past
drawing new pictures


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post Jun 23 15, 15:50
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drawing a pitcher
of fresh, cold mountain water;
rejuvenation


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post Jun 24 15, 10:31
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juvenile reed shuns
growing roots in river banks
floating when it floods


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post Jun 26 15, 06:55
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floating when it floods
are yesterday's flushes:
sewer invasion


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post Jun 26 15, 13:01
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sour inversions
opossums eat persimmons
upside down grimace


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post Jun 28 15, 20:30
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upside: down feathers
fall from of a silly goose...
but sleep's serious


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post Jun 28 15, 23:56
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serious sheep butt
when they hear the clippers’ sound
is it sheer terror


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post Jun 30 15, 12:30
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sheepish terror:
when the stalking wolf
bites ewe in the butt


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Larry
post Jun 30 15, 16:11
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Hi Daniel,

Have we reverted to the faux-ku? Would the title be "Wool Stalkings"?

Larry


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post Jun 30 15, 18:56
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ewes butt in a bight
she didn’t join the party
shepherd's clips and dip


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JustDaniel
post Jul 2 15, 00:18
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Hey Larry!

Haiku can certainly have word play... but your suggestion would definitely make mine into a faux-ku!


shepherd slips in dip
on the jagged canyon floor;
rams the lamb's dam


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post Jul 2 15, 09:39
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damn ram’s on the lam
ding-dong bell help to track him
follow his tinkle


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post Jul 3 15, 01:40
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following tinkles
Fido circles property;
asserts boundary


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post Jul 3 15, 12:11
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asses bound away
when someone tries to ride them
mules will hardly move


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JustDaniel
post Jul 6 15, 22:34
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mule wills hardly moved
by harsh assertive treatment;
nothing else either


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