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Jun 14 15, 11:26
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whelps spice up your life according to 'Fifty Shades'... (I haven't read it.)
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Jun 14 15, 13:54
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it has a red eye when stalking in the forest you better not blink
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Jun 14 15, 22:50
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a butter nut winks at a vanilla bean; ice cream flavor born
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Jun 18 15, 12:33
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flavors scream "I burn." peppers the color of flames habanero sauce
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Jun 22 15, 08:51
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hibernating suits most varieties of bear; future fireplace rug
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Jun 23 15, 13:23
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fire rubs future's place with the charcoal of the past drawing new pictures
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Jun 23 15, 15:50
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drawing a pitcher of fresh, cold mountain water; rejuvenation
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Jun 24 15, 10:31
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juvenile reed shuns growing roots in river banks floating when it floods
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Jun 26 15, 06:55
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floating when it floods are yesterday's flushes: sewer invasion
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Jun 26 15, 13:01
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sour inversions opossums eat persimmons upside down grimace
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Jun 28 15, 20:30
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upside: down feathers fall from of a silly goose... but sleep's serious
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Jun 28 15, 23:56
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serious sheep butt when they hear the clippers’ sound is it sheer terror
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Jun 30 15, 12:30
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sheepish terror: when the stalking wolf bites ewe in the butt
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Jun 30 15, 16:11
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Hi Daniel,
Have we reverted to the faux-ku? Would the title be "Wool Stalkings"?
Larry
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Jun 30 15, 18:56
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ewes butt in a bight she didn’t join the party shepherd's clips and dip
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Jul 2 15, 00:18
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Hey Larry!
Haiku can certainly have word play... but your suggestion would definitely make mine into a faux-ku!
shepherd slips in dip on the jagged canyon floor; rams the lamb's dam
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Jul 2 15, 09:39
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damn ram’s on the lam ding-dong bell help to track him follow his tinkle
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Jul 3 15, 01:40
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following tinkles Fido circles property; asserts boundary
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Jul 3 15, 12:11
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asses bound away when someone tries to ride them mules will hardly move
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Jul 6 15, 22:34
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mule wills hardly moved by harsh assertive treatment; nothing else either
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