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Apr 5 13, 01:55
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OBESE WAN KANOBE
Rather eat humble pie than starve. He's addicted to much calorific intake - and fat ....
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Apr 5 13, 13:10
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Anwat the terrorist tried to blow up the bus but ended up in the E.R.... burnt lips!
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Apr 5 13, 13:43
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burnt lips may be result of much too hot kisses with lady who is not your wife; remorse
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Apr 5 13, 13:49
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re Morse: he was tapped out after the lines were up; he found he could not generate all day
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Apr 5 13, 13:51
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all day all of the night Rod Steiger, Sydney P were acting sparks off each other fires dimmed
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Apr 5 13, 13:57
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firs dim the morning sun whispering through branches as they wave to the departing moonbeams
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Apr 5 13, 13:59
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moonbeams pie in the sky I'll settle for moonshine any night or day of the week I'm pished
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Apr 5 13, 14:08
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impish poet Alan is sitting in the pub sloshing about his mug of ale in song
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Apr 5 13, 15:05
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unsung and unmourned too makes life very simple those left in arrears, or behind go on
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Apr 6 13, 00:14
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gone on I'm not sung, mourned nor grieved over by those whose rears I can no longer see in front
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Apr 6 13, 00:40
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POSITIVELY PRESIDENTIAL
Such front that fellow has wide as Mississippi with a rear of similar proport- ions
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Apr 6 13, 01:07
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Did you mean:
... with a rear of similar pro portions
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poor shun expensive cuts and those posh restaurants but spend their pay on lottery tickets
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Apr 6 13, 16:51
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tickets untold riches if only my numbers would strike like sudden lightning bolt small chance
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Apr 6 13, 18:10
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small change spent over time adds up to lots of dough which soon equals pounds of money or not
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Apr 6 13, 21:41
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oar knot caused it to break ... thus the proverbial up a creek without a paddle boatman
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Apr 7 13, 16:09
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boatman row boat ashore so me and my good mate can forever go on razzle tonight
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Apr 7 13, 19:21
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Tonight with Jay Leno will be superseded by Tonight with Jimmy Fallon next year
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Apr 9 13, 01:26
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next year I'll have a clue who Jimmy Fallon is - no culture, no US TV - poor me
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Apr 9 13, 07:19
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pour you into your bed when you should be asleep; no need to bother yourself o'er Jimmy
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Apr 10 13, 23:52
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Jimmy is a big clown but well versed in music and now has a new venue to foul on
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