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Feb 7 13, 11:49
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"trust Smee" say Hook's captives; "fat chance that he'll hurt us and he'll do his darnedest to fix our socks"
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Feb 8 13, 00:46
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our shocks are lessened by the current mores unhinging our mind, when it should a pawl
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Feb 8 13, 10:19
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my paw is bigger than your drunken granpawpaw; he'll drink him under your picnic table
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Feb 8 13, 17:32
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the bull, rattling horns, dies in the arena; he’s not the star so he gets paid cast rate
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Feb 9 13, 04:18
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cure rate using chemo is hardly sufficient for me to decide that I should use it
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Feb 10 13, 00:39
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you sit and wonder how they can heal the body using chemical isotope poisons
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Feb 10 13, 21:32
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poi sounds kind of icky after it's been pounded and to me doesn't taste any better
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Feb 11 13, 10:34
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batter should be folded or the cakes and the breads are bases, bats and balls used by batters
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Feb 11 13, 10:51
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batters may be swingers but those with larger gloves and bigger feet will play the field tonight
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Feb 11 13, 11:59
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to knight one must submit to someone with a sword, a steady hand and no cutting remarks
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Feb 11 13, 14:38
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re marks on a sword blade with dripping red substance: king's hand was not sufficiently steady
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Feb 12 13, 01:15
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staid, he matched the dullness of his official sword or it would have been the knights day to die
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Feb 12 13, 06:10
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to dye or not to dye oft-repeated question with infamous scourge of the sea: Greybeard
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Feb 12 13, 10:43
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grey bread: a wry mixture of flours, beer and salt takes a very long time to make; try some
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Feb 12 13, 15:48
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threesome fine on golf course but not so much in bed - unless of course you've been blessed with triplets
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Feb 13 13, 15:32
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triplets are small branches that will get in the way when limbs mesh in a his and hers tumble
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Feb 13 13, 15:41
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fumble not the football: the first gridiron faux pas; second: don't ever think outside the lines
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Feb 13 13, 16:07
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felines don't play football but they'll paw-ticipate if the first prize ain't a cat ass trophy
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Feb 13 13, 16:19
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strophe number twenty makes your poem too long - at least for the kind of dawdle we've writ
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Feb 14 13, 10:01
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weave, knit do whatever simply create something before they write another lame faux-ku!
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