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Nov 1 12, 02:38
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SEEING RED ?
armless and legless too this just shows the effects of far too much inhalation of wine
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Nov 4 12, 08:46
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off-line I've had less time for anything but work especially now that I'm not working
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Nov 7 12, 16:05
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working is not a choice after you have retired, it's required to finish "honey- do" lists.
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Nov 7 12, 17:04
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Do-list all your do-ties do include done-by time or Honey will have you horse-whipped at dawn
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Nov 13 12, 10:34
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at dawn you may be shot while taking your shoes off and sneaking into the house by your spouse
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Nov 16 12, 17:38
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your spouts off at your wife were a poor idea... notice that that comfy old couch just ain't
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Nov 19 12, 15:36
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just taint surrounding air with colorful jests when she's serious and you'll wish you died
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Nov 19 12, 17:00
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You died
You'd eyed the fair young maid just the once too often for your wife's oft-stretched tolerance : you died
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Nov 20 12, 15:44
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ewe dyed a garish green hides in the tall grasses from rams with one too many horns sheepish
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Nov 20 12, 17:26
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She pish behind a bush. What a relief that was; Mafeking had nothing on that gold rush ....
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Nov 22 12, 12:37
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goal-rush unsuccessful; kicked it over the net and goalie passed to the forward who scored
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Nov 27 12, 16:29
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who's cored a ripe apple only to find some worm eating the seeds of a future harvest
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Dec 1 12, 08:45
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her vest sporting snowflakes glistens from the sunbeams reflecting off the dust that fell last night
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Dec 5 12, 15:54
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Hi Daniel,
This, too, seems to be of a personal nature and I feel it occured the night before your "haiku" submission. That's just my opinion but is the impression I get. Once more I'll try to fit something in which maintains the parameters of this thread without ruining the thoughts of "your daughter?".
lest night steal away dreams, I sit and reminisce about those long-lost childhood days... crying
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Dec 7 12, 15:46
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crying may yet go on into the evening but the morrow dawns with your joy renewed QUOTE crying may yet last on through the evening but the morrow dawns with your joy renewed
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Dec 7 12, 23:04
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re: new Cinquain format with two-three-five-eight-two; just wondering because it's your baby
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Dec 9 12, 17:35
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baby me a little; I often make mistakes when I try to make corrections... and goof!
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Dec 10 12, 00:46
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hand golf is a new game where your fingers are clubs and you may be penalized for birdies
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Dec 19 12, 08:04
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boarders are just roomers who also eat their meals at the same place they sleep... lest they're rumors
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Dec 21 12, 16:17
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roamers have no borders they travel all over, conning and cunning; they even gyp sees
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