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Alan
post Nov 1 12, 02:38
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SEEING RED ?

armless
and legless too
this just shows the effects
of far too much inhalation
of wine

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post Nov 4 12, 08:46
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off-line
I've had less time
for anything but work
especially now that I'm not
working


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post Nov 7 12, 16:05
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working
is not a choice
after you have retired,
it's required to finish "honey-
do" lists.


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post Nov 7 12, 17:04
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Do-list
all your do-ties
do include done-by time
or Honey will have you horse-whipped
at dawn

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Larry
post Nov 13 12, 10:34
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at dawn
you may be shot
while taking your shoes off
and sneaking into the house by
your spouse


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post Nov 16 12, 17:38
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your spouts
off at your wife
were a poor idea...
notice that that comfy old couch
just ain't


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post Nov 19 12, 15:36
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just taint
surrounding air
with colorful jests
when she's serious and you'll wish
you died


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post Nov 19 12, 17:00
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You died

You'd eyed
the fair young maid
just the once too often
for your wife's oft-stretched tolerance :
you died

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Larry
post Nov 20 12, 15:44
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ewe dyed
a garish green
hides in the tall grasses
from rams with one too many horns
sheepish


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post Nov 20 12, 17:26
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She pish
behind a bush.
What a relief that was;
Mafeking had nothing on that
gold rush ....

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post Nov 22 12, 12:37
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goal-rush
unsuccessful;
kicked it over the net
and goalie passed to the forward
who scored


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post Nov 27 12, 16:29
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who's cored
a ripe apple
only to find some worm
eating the seeds of a future
harvest


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post Dec 1 12, 08:45
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her vest
sporting snowflakes
glistens from the sunbeams
reflecting off the dust that fell
last night


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post Dec 5 12, 15:54
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Hi Daniel,

This, too, seems to be of a personal nature and I feel it occured the night before your "haiku" submission. That's just my opinion but is the impression I get. Once more I'll try to fit something in which maintains the parameters of this thread without ruining the thoughts of "your daughter?".


lest night
steal away dreams,
I sit and reminisce
about those long-lost childhood days...
crying


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post Dec 7 12, 15:46
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crying
may yet go on
into the evening
but the morrow dawns with your joy
renewed

QUOTE
crying
may yet last
on through the evening
but the morrow dawns with your joy
renewed


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post Dec 7 12, 23:04
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re: new
Cinquain format
with two-three-five-eight-two;
just wondering because it's your
baby


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post Dec 9 12, 17:35
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baby
me a little;
I often make mistakes
when I try to make corrections...
and goof!


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post Dec 10 12, 00:46
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hand golf
is a new game
where your fingers are clubs
and you may be penalized for
birdies


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Dec 19 12, 08:04
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boarders
are just roomers
who also eat their meals
at the same place they sleep... lest they're
rumors


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Larry
post Dec 21 12, 16:17
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roamers
have no borders
they travel all over,
conning and cunning; they even
gyp sees


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