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May 11 12, 10:02
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on top of the mountain the police found gumdrops evidently left by horses chewing
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May 11 12, 13:48
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shoeing a horse's feet is a sticky business for farriers who chew gumdrops at work
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May 11 12, 15:43
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a twerp might graduate becoming complete ass surpassing all understanding good lord
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May 12 12, 08:44
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good lard: oxymoron contradicting the fact that it's great for pie crusts but not humans
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May 12 12, 08:59
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humans do not trust them so say politicians trust us instead. See, we are not human
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May 12 12, 09:20
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hew men with your blunt acts until all the semblance of individuality is gone
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May 13 12, 03:35
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he's gone left me alone for weeping and gnashing and total rending of garments; who's next ?
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May 13 12, 08:26
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whose neck stretches the most being the first to try those who meet the challenge or those spineless
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May 13 12, 11:42
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spineless absent backbone is best for slithering out of responsibility coward
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May 14 12, 13:21
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cow words: mooed utterance which is heard by the herd outstanding in linquistic fields chewing
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May 14 12, 23:40
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chewing on tobacco and your last words you meant this, you meant that to hell, I will go my own way at speed
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May 15 12, 08:06
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it's spied and discovered duality's intent obfuscating innuendos pun-ish
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May 15 12, 09:31
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punish hapless wordsmith -- can't make a double play after he trips on his shoe's tongue at first
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May 15 12, 13:27
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at farce convolutions guide the bewildered mind through the complexities of ins and outs
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May 15 12, 14:25
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in doubts a confused man goes wand'rin' through his day wonderin' where he's been and where he'll go
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May 15 12, 23:58
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his heel flat, down and out in city of angels he, where some scrape the sky, scrapes dirt
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May 16 12, 04:14
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dirt's crap that's composted for their natural plot to grow vegetables for you to eat
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May 16 12, 07:13
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to eat or not to eat whether it is nobler to gobble turkey sandwiches or starve
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May 16 12, 10:12
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to starve just to lose weight will never reach your goal 'cause your body will slow itself to live
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May 17 12, 03:12
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to live hedonistic for one's pleasure is all and the devil take the heart-most away
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