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Mar 29 12, 06:11
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'Ten-shun ! Mot-i-on is, the last time I looked close, distinctly a three syllable (potion, errrm, no) movement ....
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Mar 29 12, 07:48
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Tension always builds when pronunciations aren't properly verified with a Websters!
Please note:
mo·tion [mṓsh'n] n (plural mo·tions) Source: World English Dictionary
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Mar 29 12, 08:31
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Web stars are all spiders, so say the insiders : Burl Ives has it defined in one damn flys !
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Mar 29 12, 10:17
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"Damn flies mess up my web!", said the large arachnid; but they're delicious when you add butter...
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Mar 29 12, 11:06
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Buttered husband, she said, the was a pregnant pause hungry, too many mouths to feed carving ....
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Mar 29 12, 15:16
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Carving out a living is an onerous task best left to those possessing a sharp knife.
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Mar 29 12, 16:41
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Sharp lives just be careful that you don't cut yourself too badly on the way back down young blade
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Mar 30 12, 14:38
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Jung bled analysis... perusing the psyche in a systematic way was his dream
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Mar 30 12, 15:39
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his dream is my nightmare, being told what I am by white-coated expert (I don't think); too much
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Mar 31 12, 16:44
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to much of the small crowd few words would have been fine but he took advantage and spoke too much
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Mar 31 12, 18:23
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too much spoken with much approval, opposite is when youngsters mean far out
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Apr 1 12, 08:25
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Paar out because censors edited a good joke. Today, we're surrounded by jokes that aren't.
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Apr 1 12, 09:39
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:RiverTrentNottingham.jpgThe Trent is a river unlike any other it steals from the rich and gives to the poor Alan
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Apr 1 12, 23:51
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They pour from the city on country holidays, flooding small inns and pubs like a river.
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Apr 2 12, 01:34
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River Phoenix is dead but with that fan-worship there's mighty fine chance he is reborn
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Apr 2 12, 07:03
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Reborn, he walks again in the two dimensions that brought him riches and his death. Dark Blood!
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Apr 2 12, 17:42
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Dark blood all mixed with white still makes just one colour the red of life, of love, of death equal
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Apr 3 12, 06:38
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Equid: Taxonomic name for horse-like creatures. A quid: What some have riding on horses.
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Apr 3 12, 08:12
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Horses are for courses when money of course is exchanged - my poorness the source is his wealth
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Apr 3 12, 13:19
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His wealth is ill-gotten unless I just bet four pounds. Then, when I lose, it's all for- gotten.
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