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Jan 12 12, 13:16
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withers make me wither standing next to a horse; whither shall I hide when I feel so small?
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Jan 12 12, 19:31
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Sew small stitches in quilts to keep batting in place. If not, you'll soon hand baste or tack your lumps.
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Jan 13 12, 08:18
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your lumps can be taken on your head if you tell your wife snidely that she did not sew small
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Jan 13 12, 12:30
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Sou’s small and often lost in pockets and value. Franc-ly, payments never seem what Euro’d.
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Jan 13 12, 12:46
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your ode is a drachma in the bucket of life; why not toss three coins into that fountain?
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Jan 15 12, 14:09
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Fountains are shallow wells into which one may toss a fourtune in coins while making wishes
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Jan 16 12, 22:57
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dishes wash easier if they are scraped off first; I prefer to let our dog do the job
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Jan 17 12, 08:31
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That job is what we call "Free Water" pre-washing; available in canine and feline.
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Jan 17 12, 10:06
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fee line is quite simple: dog gladly does it free; cats do it only if they feel like it
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Jan 17 12, 14:49
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Like it? All dogs lick it. Cats are more discerning, but neither cats nor dogs stop at dishes.
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Jan 17 12, 15:40
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dish it out if you can take it when it's dished back... but if you suppress it you may explode
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Jan 18 12, 09:53
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Explore various paths which make it difficult for one to reply with witty retorts.
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Jan 19 12, 10:01
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resort to serious political subjects if you would write spectacular humor
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Jan 19 12, 11:13
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Humor: Palliative which mitigates the guilt concomitant with voting for rich fools.
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Jan 19 12, 12:37
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richness fools many folk; it makes us swallow cake when we ought to be making bread to live
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Jan 20 12, 22:49
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Live to experience the finer things in life. Family, friends and love surpass cake crumbs.
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Jan 21 12, 01:37
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ADIEU or : Oh crumbs, wherefore art thou crumbs ....
Cake crumbs, biscuits crumble. The ying and yang of life - if you don't like it, please depart this life ....
Alan
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Jan 22 12, 07:07
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this life is too precious to yield to a fool's whims; if you're depressed, don't listen to Alan [I'm kidding, Alan!]
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Jan 22 12, 07:30
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Toucheeee !
Love Alan
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Jan 22 12, 11:35
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Alan, one never leaves a good job unfinished. Living life is the biggest job we do.
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