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Apr 10 17, 20:39
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spring up after you fall and you may hurt yourself more than when you actually fell down
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Apr 13 17, 13:28
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fell down learning how to waterski and held on to the towing rope but I lost my suit
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Apr 13 17, 15:13
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my suit royals and ace but did I draw the nine? [must have shuffled off for a break] - ed. nein! nein!
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Apr 17 17, 14:05
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nine? nine? there’s something wrong with the Cinquain I read; could it be that Microsoft Word ate eight?
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Apr 17 17, 16:14
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eight ain't in my first post; my brain had shuffled off but I didn't get Buffalo winglets
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Apr 19 17, 22:42
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wings let lots of birds fly but a few of them can’t because they have evolved and grew large legs
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Apr 20 17, 04:49
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large legs have been breaded after they had been bred by old Mister Perdue; he ruled the roost
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Apr 22 17, 21:19
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the roost was for ladies who wanted to have fun and drink with someone who was not hen pecked
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Apr 24 17, 01:36
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hen pecked on Pavlov's tabs as he conditioned her to choose the ones that he wanted for feed
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Apr 26 17, 22:22
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for feed to slop the pigs pens are set on stair-steps and their undigested food is washed down
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Apr 27 17, 03:32
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washed down afternoon meal with a large diet drink but it all came up and then down the loo
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Apr 28 17, 23:34
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the loo and how it’s used seems to predominate the greater part of all your posts lately
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Apr 30 17, 06:03
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lateness to the toilet can make a person think a great deal about the water closet
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May 1 17, 21:07
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closet filled with old clothes that won’t fit any more is like button-fly jeans; I can’t close it
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May 10 17, 18:54
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close it to keep the smell outside of your drawers; no need to carry the bathroom odors
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May 13 17, 18:59
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odors will permeate the hardest surfaces so use bone china when serving Hors d'oeuvres
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May 17 17, 07:41
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horse hooves ply through droppings that have pungent odors unless you shovel their stalls well daily
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May 17 17, 22:33
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no bull
daily exercising a small herd of horses helps fertilize the countryside for free
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May 20 17, 21:24
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for fee his horses will poo all over your field; spread a little hay over it and wait
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May 22 17, 13:15
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“and wait” comes right after the military phrase, “hurry up”, then stand in line for some chow
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