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JustDaniel
post Apr 10 17, 20:39
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spring up
after you fall
and you may hurt yourself
more than when you actually
fell down


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post Apr 13 17, 13:28
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fell down
learning how to
waterski and held on
to the towing rope but I lost
my suit


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post Apr 13 17, 15:13
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my suit
royals and ace
but did I draw the nine?
[must have shuffled off for a break] - ed.
nein! nein!


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post Apr 17 17, 14:05
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nine? nine?
there’s something wrong
with the Cinquain I read;
could it be that Microsoft Word
ate eight?


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post Apr 17 17, 16:14
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eight ain't
in my first post;
my brain had shuffled off
but I didn't get Buffalo
winglets


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post Apr 19 17, 22:42
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wings let
lots of birds fly
but a few of them can’t
because they have evolved and grew
large legs


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post Apr 20 17, 04:49
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large legs
have been breaded
after they had been bred
by old Mister Perdue; he ruled
the roost


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post Apr 22 17, 21:19
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the roost
was for ladies
who wanted to have fun
and drink with someone who was not
hen pecked


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post Apr 24 17, 01:36
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hen pecked
on Pavlov's tabs
as he conditioned her
to choose the ones that he wanted
for feed


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post Apr 26 17, 22:22
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for feed
to slop the pigs
pens are set on stair-steps
and their undigested food is
washed down


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post Apr 27 17, 03:32
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washed down
afternoon meal
with a large diet drink
but it all came up and then down
the loo


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post Apr 28 17, 23:34
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the loo
and how it’s used
seems to predominate
the greater part of all your posts
lately


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post Apr 30 17, 06:03
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lateness
to the toilet
can make a person think
a great deal about the water
closet


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post May 1 17, 21:07
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closet
filled with old clothes
that won’t fit any more
is like button-fly jeans; I can’t
close it


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post May 10 17, 18:54
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close it
to keep the smell
outside of your drawers;
no need to carry the bathroom
odors


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post May 13 17, 18:59
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odors
will permeate
the hardest surfaces
so use bone china when serving
Hors d'oeuvres


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post May 17 17, 07:41
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horse hooves
ply through droppings
that have pungent odors
unless you shovel their stalls well
daily


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post May 17 17, 22:33
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no bull

daily
exercising
a small herd of horses
helps fertilize the countryside
for free


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post May 20 17, 21:24
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for fee
his horses will
poo all over your field;
spread a little hay over it
and wait


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post May 22 17, 13:15
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“and wait”
comes right after
the military phrase,
“hurry up”, then stand in line for
some chow


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