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Mar 27 15, 06:39
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you proved yet once again that you can write cinquains bedecked with bows and ribbin's... and they float
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Mar 27 15, 09:47
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they’re flat on the bottom but they’re round on the top, that is why gravity makes you flat tired
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Mar 27 15, 10:34
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flatter concerning tires won't make them feel better; it just goes in one hole and out the next
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Mar 30 15, 09:20
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thin necks may be good things for high fashion models but the ravages of age build thick skins
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Mar 31 15, 21:24
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Thicke's kin is not funny but he is popular for his ability to sing money
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Apr 7 15, 08:10
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Monet painted pictures capturing impressions of what God made but never saw the light
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Apr 7 15, 15:46
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the light kind of humor doesn't have as many fans as our previous culture once had
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Apr 8 15, 23:48
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one sad lonely old man tried telling boxer jokes but could never remember the punch-line
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Apr 10 15, 10:08
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punch line was very long at the AA meeting; what's more is that no one had told a joke
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Apr 10 15, 14:37
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a joke for the members in an AA meeting recounts the lies they told themselves before
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Apr 10 15, 15:55
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be four or be fourteen when it's time to go pee you'd best be able to undo your pants
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Apr 11 15, 22:38
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your pants and gasps for breath when walking up the stairs reveal that you should move to the first floor
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Apr 13 15, 07:24
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first floor was only earth compacted by pacing while worrying how I might find some wood
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Apr 13 15, 14:07
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some would like hard packed earth instead of mud and moss while waiting for evolution's webbed feet
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Apr 15 15, 17:51
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wide feet run mid my kin though the running has slowed because arthritis has taken its toll
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Apr 15 15, 23:54
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It stole Morticia’s brush but Gomez got it back when Fester, Thing and Lurch held him armless
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Apr 16 15, 15:24
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wormless mother robin couldn't placate her young; father stooped to stealing Fido's dog food
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Apr 17 15, 14:56
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fog dude in the lighthouse is happy that stones make his workplace very heavy but shed's light
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Apr 21 15, 00:28
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shed's light always burns out; the large leak in the roof seems to cause the exposed socket to short
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Apr 21 15, 12:59
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too short to change light bulbs he cut holes in the wall and installed lots of windows to shed light
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