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Sep 4 14, 12:09
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flowers include roses whose stems are full of barbs; beauty, like thorns, may often be skin deep
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Sep 4 14, 23:01
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skin deep was the sunburn causing you to blister so you can't wear clothes back from the nude beach
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Sep 5 14, 09:05
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knew beach will burn my feet when I forget sandals and here I am trapped on my mat at noon
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Sep 5 14, 10:44
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known at all of the bars does not make you famous even in a small town you're just the drunk
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Sep 5 14, 12:19
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how drunk is the woman who can't walk a straight line between news and reality TV
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Sep 5 14, 14:52
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tea vies with most colas for the best beverage and it is a close second to coffee
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Sep 6 14, 03:14
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coughy in the mourning because I haven't slept or at least have never laid down my head
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Sep 7 14, 12:20
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my head my bloody head brow beaten - from INside morse code, help, get me out of here right now
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Sep 7 14, 14:19
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write now or much later it doesn't matter much because no one will ever read your thoughts
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Sep 7 14, 16:42
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your thoughts are my thoughts too we can all take a break always disturbing the printer ink out
Alan
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Sep 7 14, 17:36
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pink-out from AA cloud blurring reality that I find difficult to face so don't
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Sep 7 14, 19:09
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sewed on my new patches and was proud of myself until I found out that they were iron on
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Sep 7 14, 19:59
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she ran out of needles sew it became pointless to expect her to mend holey stockings
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Sep 8 14, 13:36
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stacking greased ball bearings is an easier task than if you are trying to push a rope
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Sep 8 14, 14:57
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a rope that had been starched was pushed down a greased hill; got the idea from the failed bearings
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Sep 8 14, 23:50
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baring everything pink he ran on the nude beach but found no way to tan his face and hide
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Sep 10 14, 07:35
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his hide will have to wait to have that perfect tan; several layers of burn must heal first
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Sep 10 14, 16:19
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heel first and then you get something for sandwiches until the end where you can't cut off crusts
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Sep 11 14, 14:55
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off-cuts are far cheaper living high off the hog is easy when you know how to end verse
Alan
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Sep 11 14, 23:56
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adverse language lesson has failed to understand ends with prepositions are not proper
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