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JustDaniel
post Aug 16 14, 14:48
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I, sage?
one would have to
stretch credibility
to make that kind of a public
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Larry
post Aug 16 14, 22:42
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state meant
to execute
the four hundred pound man
but all the doctors' efforts were
in vein


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post Aug 17 14, 02:39
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Oh Larry, you just kill me ! Alan

I'm vain
too too perfect
if you try me, I can
do and be anything for you
if arsed

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post Aug 17 14, 08:26
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I farce
and comedy
but save seriousness
for all things which I feel really
matter


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post Aug 17 14, 08:59
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matter
the universe
is built of passing stuff
with temporary permanence
for now

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post Aug 17 14, 12:51
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for now
we'll build cinquains
without an extra line
but you'll have to decide whether
that lasts


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post Aug 17 14, 13:04
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last shot
fired to correct
because some of us are
becoming forgetful when we
get old


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post Aug 17 14, 14:09
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get told
sufficient times
as we hear the clock tick
and we begin to comprehend
our age


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post Aug 17 14, 21:30
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our rage
grows more frequent
with each forgotten face
and names we can't remember like
our own


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post Aug 18 14, 01:18
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our own
Larry is right
forgetfulness forgot
to count bloody lines in and out
'ten shun !

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post Aug 18 14, 13:26
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ten shuns
the nines and eights
and sevens look like six;
five to four, when thirty two, they're
just ones


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post Aug 18 14, 15:09
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just ones
not arrested
so they decide to court
and discover that they're not good
at it


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post Aug 18 14, 17:18
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at it !
bloody again
rabbits could take lessons
in hopping like the grasshoppers
master

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post Aug 18 14, 22:30
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missed 'er
the next morning
after the day before
which was followed by a lonely
lunch date


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post Aug 18 14, 23:31
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launch date
celebration
didn’t go very well
when they broke the champagne bottle
ship sank


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post Aug 19 14, 00:44
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ship's tank
filled with diesel
caused gasoline engine
to sputter and spit out black smoke
signals


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post Aug 19 14, 01:31
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signals
warnings, beware
one too many is due
to overload and to defeat
the crunch

Alan


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post Aug 19 14, 11:05
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a crunch
in the driveway
as our tires ground the stone
deposited there yesterday
morning


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post Aug 19 14, 11:15
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mourning
very sad loss
a moment's carelessness
of all my ill-gotten schekels
deserts

Alan


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post Aug 19 14, 12:39
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desert
your family
after you've eaten all
but don't excuse yourself, you'll miss
dessert


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