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Aug 16 14, 14:48
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I, sage? one would have to stretch credibility to make that kind of a public statement
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Aug 16 14, 22:42
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state meant to execute the four hundred pound man but all the doctors' efforts were in vein
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Aug 17 14, 02:39
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Oh Larry, you just kill me ! Alan
I'm vain too too perfect if you try me, I can do and be anything for you if arsed
Alan
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Aug 17 14, 08:26
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I farce and comedy but save seriousness for all things which I feel really matter
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Aug 17 14, 08:59
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matter the universe is built of passing stuff with temporary permanence for now
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Aug 17 14, 12:51
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for now we'll build cinquains without an extra line but you'll have to decide whether that lasts
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Aug 17 14, 13:04
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last shot fired to correct because some of us are becoming forgetful when we get old
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Aug 17 14, 14:09
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get told sufficient times as we hear the clock tick and we begin to comprehend our age
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Aug 17 14, 21:30
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our rage grows more frequent with each forgotten face and names we can't remember like our own
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Aug 18 14, 01:18
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our own Larry is right forgetfulness forgot to count bloody lines in and out 'ten shun !
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Aug 18 14, 13:26
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ten shuns the nines and eights and sevens look like six; five to four, when thirty two, they're just ones
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Aug 18 14, 15:09
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just ones not arrested so they decide to court and discover that they're not good at it
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Aug 18 14, 17:18
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at it ! bloody again rabbits could take lessons in hopping like the grasshoppers master
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Aug 18 14, 22:30
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missed 'er the next morning after the day before which was followed by a lonely lunch date
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Aug 18 14, 23:31
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launch date celebration didn’t go very well when they broke the champagne bottle ship sank
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Aug 19 14, 00:44
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ship's tank filled with diesel caused gasoline engine to sputter and spit out black smoke signals
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Aug 19 14, 01:31
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signals warnings, beware one too many is due to overload and to defeat the crunch
Alan
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Aug 19 14, 11:05
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a crunch in the driveway as our tires ground the stone deposited there yesterday morning
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Aug 19 14, 11:15
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mourning very sad loss a moment's carelessness of all my ill-gotten schekels deserts
Alan
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Aug 19 14, 12:39
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desert your family after you've eaten all but don't excuse yourself, you'll miss dessert
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