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Aug 12 14, 15:26
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rough age when you cannot correctly digest food; before chewing, some forks fail in test tines
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Aug 12 14, 23:21
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test teens on their grammar and most of them will ask if you're talking about dad's or mom's mom
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Aug 13 14, 03:52
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roughage makes world go poop which is very good thing alternative : constipation and smells
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Aug 13 14, 11:10
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mom's mom can't clean her house because she doesn't have the energy... or any help... and smells
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Aug 13 14, 11:41
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odours are refined stinks Hepzibah : refined skunk living in Okeefenokee n'est ce pas ?
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Aug 13 14, 18:06
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nest pa kept the eggs warm until the babies hatched; the chicks peeped and mama peeked in to help
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Aug 14 14, 01:51
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to help or not to help pass on the other side help is the good samaritan at play
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Aug 14 14, 13:14
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at play he brought pop corn freaking out his neighbors who snubbed him with their hard candy wrappers
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Aug 14 14, 13:29
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rappers are such clappers with their endless snappers and some words floating like flappers trappers
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Aug 14 14, 13:52
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crappers are not pretty but then just imagine how nice your life would be if there were none
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Aug 14 14, 23:41
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werenuns are what you get when they're tending their flock and fresh guys earn a reprimand... wolf's bane
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Aug 15 14, 00:36
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Beowulf visits Hrothgar where he is insulted but ends up with the claw of fiend Grendel
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Aug 15 14, 02:16
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Grendel misunderstood merely wanted loving so continually hugged you til dead
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Aug 15 14, 02:38
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till dead grass under soil to get ready to plant after it rots there for one more season
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Aug 15 14, 07:02
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season with salt, pepper to make quite delicious that king of all the meats simple
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Aug 15 14, 13:38
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sample everything once without salt and pepper then you can embellish or you might then choose to keep it simple
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Aug 15 14, 18:47
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simple complexity confuses everyone who doesn't know how simple it can be
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Aug 16 14, 00:19
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can be super easy or it can be quite hard or rather mushy in between a life
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Aug 16 14, 00:32
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a leaf fell from the tree, was buried by others and stayed warm all through the winter snowfall
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Aug 16 14, 07:55
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snow fall then through winter and on into springtime that way, we can have another ice age
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