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Jul 15 14, 04:43
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hookers tend to knitting spending time with sweaters; they keep a person warm on long cold nights
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Jul 15 14, 10:23
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coal's nice for your furnace but what kind should I use? my choices are anthracite or lignite
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Jul 15 14, 10:59
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ignite blue touch paper then stand well back unless you want singed eyebrows and tressed locks : fire works !
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Jul 16 14, 13:27
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fine work by a sculptor transforms a breathless block into a seething, pulsating life form
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Jul 16 14, 14:30
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lie, or dissemble or even tell naked truth no one knows difference now'days : spinning
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Jul 16 14, 17:15
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spineless spinning of facts divests truth of meaning and leaves real communication no chance
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Jul 16 14, 18:10
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nacho and melted cheese go down my throat a treat while enchiladas follow on down south
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Jul 17 14, 11:59
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down south things go slower and conversations take considerably longer to digest
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Jul 17 14, 15:40
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digest some shrimp creole with a cornbread muffin and you will put a smile on your stomach
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Jul 17 14, 17:04
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stomach all you can eat and then quite a bit more for food is free to end user this time
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Jul 17 14, 23:40
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the stein will hold a pint if you're in Germany but pints in England hold twenty ounces
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Jul 18 14, 02:02
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onesies - bane of mankind used to go two by two in God's over-arking purpose Noah
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Jul 18 14, 05:58
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know a pitched ark-builder whose prophets are above water... not to mention the ground flooded?
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Jul 18 14, 13:21
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floated menagerie held more than two of each or else the chosen ones would have all starved
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Jul 18 14, 14:37
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starving is not fasting but it is much slower; without water one could lose weight in vein
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Jul 21 14, 02:27
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intra- veinous drip feed secures one's life sometimes when all else fails to nourish one : drip drip ....
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Jul 21 14, 12:38
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drip strips in the open not caring that others see his strange, ludicrous private display
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Jul 21 14, 16:50
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his play is x-rated filled with unwelcome lines and the plot will only reveal old junk
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Jul 21 14, 17:21
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old bunk is in danger of dropping its sleeper atop the unsuspecting one below
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Jul 22 14, 05:26
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bellow of frustration why oh why can't men be as sensible and down-to-earth as gals ?
Alan
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