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Apr 9 14, 12:11
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so niece picks up the poo and rubs it on her face to accelerate her mother's aging
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Apr 9 14, 23:10
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aging of good manure helps the grass grow taller so cows give more milk for yogurt facials
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Apr 10 14, 09:37
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face it; barking, Yo, Gurt is better for Rocky than for one of us suburban white folks
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Apr 11 14, 17:24
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Watts folks use a language which may be Ebonics; so called due to education or care
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Apr 14 14, 19:52
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oar care may well prevent your being up a creek without a paddle to steer you back down
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Apr 14 14, 22:23
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beak down the Kingfisher flies across the water hoping to catch small fry and not be caught
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Apr 15 14, 06:02
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B-cot is on the top in the recruit barracks where the drill sergeant is likely to yell
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Apr 15 14, 10:16
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To yell Or not to yell That is NOT the question The question is how LOUD to yell Stoopid
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Apr 15 14, 10:32
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he stooped over the head so he could spill his gut from drinking too much beverage last night
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Apr 15 14, 22:56
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last night I was younger but now they say I'm not because I have lived to my next birthday
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Apr 16 14, 12:49
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birthday greetings, my friend! today is my first day as a homeowner in VinelandNJ
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Apr 16 14, 23:51
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not just a brand-new home but a place where each breath can feed the lungs as well as feed the soul
Thanks for the link. Nice place but it need a few flower beds.
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Apr 17 14, 08:51
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the sole reason to move was so our family could be there with us at the house next door(We purchased BOTH houses, closing on Tuesday. Together, we now have over nine acres, half of which is cleared for farming. Son Jason will be clearing some of the wooded area too, as time goes on.)
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Apr 17 14, 17:59
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Next door To family Is the best way to go Each should be able to own his Own plot
Alan
(No offence Daniel! Just musing !)
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Apr 18 14, 13:03
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own plot at Veterans Cemetery, BridgetonI hope that lays all your worries to rest
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Apr 18 14, 18:58
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To rest It is well-earned One's duties are all done Except eternal vigilance For now......
Alan
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Apr 19 14, 14:47
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foreknow what the future holds for you and your kin and you are likely a prophet... or quack
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Apr 21 14, 22:50
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ear quaked so we paddled because banjo music started getting closer and I liked rock
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Apr 22 14, 14:58
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slick rock causes a fall into the icy stream where your body temperature plummets
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Apr 22 14, 17:17
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Plum tarts Are to our thumbs What cots are to pigeons The heavenly reward well deserved Homing
Alan
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