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Mar 6 14, 11:02
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two beats to a measure for the cowboys' two-step as they sashay across the floor tonight
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Mar 8 14, 12:44
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two nights, or is it three ? you are very welcome to stay/pay as long as you like - for now
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Mar 8 14, 21:24
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porno is ill-advised in genteel company but is even more dangerous alone
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Mar 8 14, 21:41
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a loan may help you now but paying it all back plus the interest charged will leave you all own
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Mar 9 14, 03:31
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all own to ev'ry sin claiming Mea Culpa and Mea Maxima Culpa endless
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Mar 9 14, 22:08
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endless can be a pain in nearly everything but especially for those who would sit
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Mar 10 14, 02:25
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wood seat hard surface waits for every soft bum seeking refuge but finding none that's life
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Mar 10 14, 11:32
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that slice of limburger smelled up the whole kitchen; but the patrons said of the chef: good taste
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Mar 10 14, 12:40
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goo taste most modern food full of damn additives to clog your taste buds right up your nose
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Mar 10 14, 19:12
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who knows what's in the food we purchase at the store when all the fine print is too small to read
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Mar 11 14, 11:20
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to read all the fine print is fool's occupation while the cornflakes get too soggy to eat
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Mar 11 14, 11:43
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two wheats and ten other whole grains make up my bread; they all seem essential for my rough age
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Mar 11 14, 12:40
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rough edge can be smoothed out if you give it your all at least that’s what I heard in an old saw
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Mar 11 14, 13:09
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old saws tend to get dull so using them to write is only for the like-witted readers
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Mar 11 14, 13:32
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reeders all use woodwinds whereas the brass section huff and puff like out of shape men blowing
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Mar 11 14, 13:55
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blowing in the dead wind the future, or the past why worry, be happy, enjoy today
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Mar 11 14, 13:55
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blowing dandelions spreads their seeds all over your neighbor's unsuspecting green lawnscape
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Mar 11 14, 14:39
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moonscape Armstrong's heaven watch distant earth float by and think it is out of this world for now
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Mar 11 14, 18:16
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foreknow the final score when you watch a taped game and your guests think that it is live; safe bet!
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Mar 12 14, 02:04
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safe bit horse's mouthpiece not shill, but inventor and no doubt animal lover (censored)
Alan
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