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Jun 8 13, 23:49
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mind rots when not in use, exercise it often even if thinking of thinking or else
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Jun 10 13, 09:22
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What else is there to do ? Let mind rot with body thus you create a great vintage poop
Alan
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Jun 10 13, 10:07
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too pooped for just one more syllable, friend Alan? maybe you should lie down to take a rest?
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Jun 10 13, 15:22
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arrest for just dropping one lousy syllable, perhaps there was enough rot for two poops
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Jun 11 13, 10:59
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2Pac redirected his parents' Black Panther beliefs, evoking violence to death
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Jun 11 13, 15:27
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toed earth envisioning the gate being released the other horses agreed that I’d win
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Jun 12 13, 06:52
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ed. note: That would be "gate's being released", Larry, as a gerund is modified by a possessive. Sorry if I seem possessive!!
Ed Wynn the Perfect Fool influenced Red Skelton on Ziegfield and as vaudeville stand-up
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Jun 12 13, 08:51
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stained up from erasures, the blackboard of my mind needs washed. chalk it up to senior moments.
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Jun 12 13, 12:27
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mow meant merely to trim the grass... but some flowers had some of their leaves and petals ground down
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Jun 12 13, 16:40
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ground down and the sky up that is the way to fly unless you are in a dog fight... Shih Tzu
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Jun 12 13, 16:55
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shit zoo when groundskeepers decide to go on strike; once they settle, it takes two weeks to clean
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Jun 13 13, 13:39
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Toucan is a big bird who uses his large beak to climb and eat so he can foot the bill
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Jun 13 13, 14:45
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they bill for services even if they neglect to do anything on your street: taxes
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Jun 18 13, 00:40
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text is the quickest way to get your point across the dashboard and a newspaper’s obit
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Jun 18 13, 10:18
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orbit Larry's cabin in search of his death wish; look hard, because he has a plan to live
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Jun 18 13, 17:32
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olive trees are barren strong winds blew off the blooms now my favorite pizza is the pits
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Jun 19 13, 12:08
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her pits were unshaven and smelled like a slime pit but she was as shapely as her toilet
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Jun 19 13, 14:40
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toil ate all my spare time so vacations were spent finding more commodious climes to play
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Jun 20 13, 18:11
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two play honest Scrabble while they teach each other new words and how to use them best on board
P.S. This is a tribute to my Dad's cultivating me as an opponent in the game we loved so much!
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Jun 23 13, 23:38
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on boards the dice tumble pieces and tiles are moved pathways through neurons are formed with knowledge
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