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May 5 13, 23:36
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in depth live coverage leaves much to be desired when those reporting the news are shallow
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May 6 13, 09:12
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shallow water waders often fear getting in over their heads, so end up not swimming
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May 7 13, 14:09
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swimming in some waters may chill you to your bones when you grasp that death rides on strange creatures
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May 7 13, 16:51
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creatures are but shadows of Him Who created them in His own image to show glory
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May 14 13, 11:03
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glory hallelujah his lies go marching on while the rest of us contemplate navel
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May 14 13, 11:34
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navel aviators contemplate their own lies to themselves about what they know at heart
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May 14 13, 11:45
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at heart man is a beast or so some would have it but the truth is simpler - man is the best
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May 14 13, 16:13
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the best is not enough when compared to the truth but it can free those whose eyes are opened
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May 14 13, 22:04
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opened a can of worms great diet for a fish then eaten by a larger fish et c.
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May 15 13, 00:01
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etchings on soda cans in the recycle bin are much less likely to be read than drunk
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May 15 13, 00:10
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when drunk soda goes fizz impinging on nostrils causing tingling right up ones nose at-choo
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May 15 13, 00:23
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atchoo when it's at you causes consternation; you'd think that he'd cover his nose -- not yours!
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May 16 13, 11:05
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not sure’s are too fickle to make a decision, ambivalence causes lots of problems
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May 16 13, 11:21
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pro-phlegm is too snotty a position for Moms to have about allergy meds for kids
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May 16 13, 23:49
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four kids with allergies will not be a problem if all are taught how to keep their nose clean
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May 17 13, 12:40
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noose clean around your neck could be quite dangerous if you're sitting atop a horse shackled
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May 19 13, 12:14
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shackled to metal bed the hostage tries to pray and curses his evil captors and waits
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May 19 13, 17:56
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the weights on his ankles pull him through the trap door jerking the noose around his neck... 'til death
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May 20 13, 00:16
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tilled earth with an old mule and a black cast-iron plow, sowing tomorrows until death and rust
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May 20 13, 13:59
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end rust with stainless steel in everything you use... except toilet tissue and tooth brushes
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